Sunday, February 10, 2013

Loving You!

                                                                     Image: 'Artwork' by Joseph Lorusso
Image: Courtesy of Tess' Mag

You had sounded so tense and desperate
I rushed over here when I got your tweet
What's up? I told myself not to be late
Nothing pressing I thought we should meet

I'm really so glad nothing's the matter
You had me worried for one brief moment
Been meaning to call but something or other
Got in the way that got me off tangent

I thought we agreed to meet in a few days
That was the reason why I was so afraid
I'm sorry Honey, I was aware but as I laze
thoughts of you swirled wildly in my head

Best we meet I decided to call you anyway 
I just can't wait to call you this time
I know it may just be another few more days
But I'll kiss anyway for Happy Valentine!

Written for Tess' Magpie Tales #155

20 comments:

  1. Since Valentine is long way away
    Let's do it on Chunese New Year to-day

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    1. Gosh Pakcik, it rekindles fond memories. Yes, today and any other day so sweetly!

      Hank

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  2. That's right, Pakcik!

    Now Sir Hank...

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  3. Valentine's certainly brings out the romantic. Nice one.

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  4. Ardent and touching at the same time. Well done.

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  5. smiles...nice...hey with that kind of reception i will call her quite often you know...ha...and valentines...ah wont be long...smiles...

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  6. Sometime's its too hard to wait for that phone call!

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  7. Nice addition of the tweet, as many go that beat and yeah the day is almost here, that is hated by my little rhyming rear..haha

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  8. Any excuse for an early Valentine kiss - You sounded so tense? It worked though didn't it - just like your poem.

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  9. Breathing a sigh of relief ... at first I thought you might be heading into something disastrous!

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  10. why wait a few days! Very romantic!!

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  11. haha

    Surprised he is waiting so long to see her again...

    =)

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  12. True romance lives, indeed...takes my breath away...

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  13. Everything is better with a kiss!

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  14. i like how it started with running over to the restaurant because of the tweet and then at the end it was all about valentines day.

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  15. the protagonist sure got fooled about the purpose of coming there!!

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  16. Very clever, Hank, tou had me fearing the worst for nine tenths of it. What could possible be wrong ?

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  17. All for a kiss. Love the "can't wait" of young love... sigh.

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