Thursday, March 17, 2022

What was she to do

                                                                    Author: https://www.myupchar.com/en
Image: Decidedly Depressed (here)

Decidedly depressed
Could not hide her emotions
Others did not express
Any kinds of suggestions

What was she to do
It was a lone battle
Fuzzy and feeling blue
It was a big muddle

The love of her life
Had frittered away
Her being now nose-dived
Much to her dismay

Easy in giving her all
Nurtured of good tidings
Now felt rather small
All had gone with the wind

More guarded now
In expending feelings
Not way she did before
Which left her reeling

Bjorn at d'Verse OLN#312
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10 comments:

  1. Gillena CoxMarch 17, 2022 at 11:56 PM

    Sadly she now has to nature the strength to heal and move forward. Its the only way

    Much💜love

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  2. Alex J. CavanaughMarch 18, 2022 at 4:39 AM

    The pain of loss...

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  3. colleenMarch 18, 2022 at 8:59 AM

    Nice rhythmic verse. I feel sad for her.

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  4. TruedessaMarch 18, 2022 at 4:21 PM

    sad and relatable..

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  5. IngridMarch 20, 2022 at 12:10 AM

    You capture well the battle with inner demons!

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  6. Sanaa RizviMarch 20, 2022 at 8:50 AM

    Beautifully poignant write, Hank!❤️

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  7. brudbergMarch 20, 2022 at 10:00 AM

    This is such a sad story.. and it happens way too often.

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  8. paeansunpluggedMarch 20, 2022 at 1:37 PM

    Very relatable, Hank.

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  9. JadeLiMarch 20, 2022 at 3:00 PM

    May she have time to heal and also one day to learn a way to find herself again. Beautiful poem.

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  10. Callsign SantaMarch 23, 2022 at 11:35 PM

    A descent into sadness...powerful words..

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