Author:Bernard DUPONT
Image: Nibbling is an art (here)
unlike nibbling a biscuit nibbling
on an idea is to travel
in space without really thinking
but unwittingly one idea may be good
it'll register a victory
it gets to change the mood
well worth the efforts certainly
but unwittingly one idea may be good
it'll register a victory
it gets to change the mood
well worth the efforts certainly
(44 Words)
Mish at d'Verse with Quadrille#145
to include the word 'nibble'
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Well if that happens, its a good thing too!
ReplyDeleteI like the first line and how it creates a place of limbo.
ReplyDeleteClever denouement, some great lines there...the biscuit, first stanza...
ReplyDelete"nibbling
ReplyDeleteon an idea is to travel
in space without really thinking"
I love this, Hank.
-David [ben Alexander]
I think it's well worth the effort
ReplyDeleteThere's a sense of freedom in the middle and I like the way you convey it here..."travel in space without really thinking".
ReplyDeleteA journey to space, a thrilling thought. Nice.
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