Saturday, October 20, 2018

Struck at with fury

                                                                                                Author: Juliette Khalil
Image: Strong waves (here)

Struck at with fury
Up against the water lost
What did I do wrong?

Made known the hard way
As strong waves let out a cry
They set the ground rules

Chevrefeuilles' Carpe Diem Leafless Tree #1
introduction "beautiful waves"

7 comments:

  1. Excellent Hank short but good to read.

    Yvonne.

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  2. A different approach to the challenge. Well done, Hank.

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  3. I often feel the cries of heavy water.

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  4. Have to obey or go in the drink

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  5. Nice work! I enjoyed reading this poem.
    Jui Positive Cookies

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  6. Two strong haiku Hank. By the way thank you for your kind words at Jui's weblog.

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