Monday, April 20, 2015

Reflections in Innocence

Image: Courtesy of Tess' Mag #266

R for Reflections in Innocence

The given words:
never mind gorgeous emit smother pelvis bounce incessant pillow intern heroine
sublimation  (the diversion of the energy of a sexual or other biological impulse from its immediate goal to one of a more acceptable nature or use.)
syzygy (any two related things, either alike or opposite)

Never mind if you think I'm gorgeous
I am not emitting any kind of sexual power
to smother your innocence though
my pelvis keeps bouncing incessantly

I don't even have a pillow
to provide the warmth

I am an intern wanting to be a
heroine that is sublimation 
at its most enduring

Can we get a syzygy syzygy
kind of compromise?

For MLMM's hosting at Wordle # 57
Tess' hosting at Mag Tales #266
Kerry's at Tuesday's Platform at Real Toads
Blogging A to Z April Challeng


  1. Amazing how you tamed those words into a poem like that.

  2. very different words used here, amazing!

  3. Yes we can, our photo will prove it. I'm all for a syzygy kind of way! I like this 6 letter word with three y's and 3 consonants!

  4. Those words certainly make for a romping poem, Hank!

  5. The last line of the first stanza filled my mind with every bit of twerking my eyes have ever been assaulted with!

  6. You whipped those words into subservience, Hank! LOL.

  7. Very adroitly posted; clever and well written.

  8. I would try to say you challenged yourself weaving the poem from those words..

  9. Interesting luv that whimsical question
    Much love...

  10. that word list would have me throw up my hands, but you crafted them well ~

  11. Hmmm were the thought zig zag with that one haha

  12. This feels like a smaller part of a larger whole...intriguing, Hank. Thank you for visiting me. :)

  13. You brought a lot together very effectively and I like the end result.

  14. I'm amazed at the incorporation of words to the finished work. Even more so, when like you, you're able to take on two at a time! Bravo!