Saturday, July 9, 2011

A Lost Soul


Hope and A Future


It still lingers on
Her image rubs on my mind
Love is in the air

How very cruel
Infatuation on her
Numbed my soul real hard

A famous actress
An uncanny resemblance
To one dear to me

Whose love is no more
Life snuffed sudden and tragic
Brought me to the brink

Lord, show me the path
To a future full of hope
For this broken self


Inspired by Haiku Heights #51 with prompt infatuation


10 comments:

  1. blessings.
    awesome Haiku sets.

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  2. Wonderful and cleverly written. Thanks for sharing.

    Enjoy your week-end.
    Yvonne.

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  3. I'm just stopping by from Haiku Heights and have to say your work is amazing. I love the different variations that you've written here. Can't wait to read future posts here. Lola from Buddhatropolis

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  4. Excellent, Sir Hanks! A little story unfolds...

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  5. Although sad, nice write!! :-)

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  6. Powerful and sad wonderfully done

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  7. a wonderful set of haikus! sad, but well written! :)

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  8. brilliant collection of Haikus.
    wow.

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    cheers.
    bless your creativity.
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