Thursday, March 29, 2018

Heightened love feelings

                                                                                           Author: Ankita15dombe
Image: A Loving Couple (here)

Heightened love feelings
Treasured diamonds from the sky
When sparkling brightly
Extended for lasting good
Weaving down onto both laps

Chevrefeuille's  Carpe Diem 1399 - beauty-of-heart.
Fireblossom's at Real Toad's  Friday poetic - imagery

13 comments:

  1. Such beautiful "Loving Couple."

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  2. This suits the beautiful image of the mourning doves.

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  3. In my first draft of my poem, I had an image of birds nestled together.. so this seems to say perfectly what I had in mind.

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  4. diamonds ... upon laps Love that

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  5. I love the treasured diamonds from the sky.

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  6. Brought tears to the eyes....both picture and words.
    Thyank you Hank.

    Yvonne

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  7. love how you wove them together at the end

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  8. I was amazed by so human-like sensations...wow

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  9. Come together in a web all their own.

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  10. Lovely poem. Doves and humans, each expressing love

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  11. the conclusion into the laps is great.

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  12. Loving this loved up couple... :)

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  13. Romance ... nicely crafted tanka Hank.

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