Wednesday, December 6, 2017

Will it be a cold encounter?

                                                                                                    Author Suhaknoke
Image: Unlucky Visit (here)

the 11 of 12 given words:
final, homecoming, cold rain fingers 
traces past black block visit crams

A final homecoming
Would it be a cold encounter?

In the blistering rain
and with fingers crossed
traces of the past were
imposing black memories

Could unpleasantness remain
at the back burner?

Loving one's own self over others
Narcissism at its most vulnerable
Any sense in blocking it?

Perhaps it should be considered it visit
Unpleasantness would then be avoided

In not extending a welcome
it would seem a reasonable option

Cram all the embarrassment
for just one occasion
and to still remain friends

Susan's at Poets United Midweek Motif
 ~ narcissus (Vanity/Narcissism)
MMT's Sunday's Whirligig #141


  1. can get it all out of the way and enjoy the day

  2. Hank, I am not sure how you always find a way to weave those words.