Friday, April 27, 2012

Clarity

Trapped in a quagmire
Of nebulous ideas and
Clarity ignored

Splayed in the summer’s
sun. Heat impinged on his thoughts
Clarity at stake

Whose side are you on?
Hoodwink the old his pretext
Clarity is sought

Haiku Heights Day 28#140 -Clarity

14 comments:

  1. i like how you bring it back to clarity at the end of each stanza...hope he gains his clarity...

    ReplyDelete
  2. Clarity can sometimes be rare
    As things get unfair
    Hard on the mind
    Plus some have their head up their behind..haha

    ReplyDelete
  3. Clarity is often very difficult to achieve, Hank.
    I like your haiku.
    K

    ReplyDelete
  4. One thing i love reading your post Pare, is i get to learn new words... Secondly the way you do it... Smart guy!.. Love it!..

    Pareng JJ

    ReplyDelete
  5. clarity ignored...clarity at stake...clarity is sought....Great transition....Lovely haiku!
    Fuddling thoughts

    ReplyDelete
  6. Ur haiku got better and better till the end! Very clear.. :)
    Shower of rejuvenation - A Haiku

    ReplyDelete
  7. I like that searching for clarity ~

    ReplyDelete
  8. Strong question in the end, it was running in my mind when I read it!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Great trio. Well done.

    ReplyDelete
  10. I sense a story behind the story here.

    ReplyDelete