Saturday, January 11, 2020

Reflecting on good fortune and walking on air

                                                                           Author :Stanislav Beloglazov
Image: Young and Lively (here)

The  rhyming words given:
air fair pair square bare flair  

Reflecting on good fortune and walking on air
When life was of problematic indications pulsating
Looking to the night sky at stars bidding to be fair
A tussle to recollect images of a pretty plaything

Like imaginations with mutual feelings of a pair
Boy and girl whispering sweet nothings manifold
Insisting on a sacrifice towards a future as a dare
Warm memories nostalgic in part but put on hold

Mindful of pegs in round holes not a square
Careful not to upset the blessed combination
That's the way to a fabric woven without a tear
Gingerly squaring off the common irritations

The winter of their life together laid bare
Meant for each other a relationship so wonderful
What kept alive little anecdotes of blissful flair
Two hearts locked in place exquisitely beautiful

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23 comments:

  1. A wonderful verse Hank. It's good when life is good and you're walking on air. Thanks for sharing.

    Yvonne.

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  2. I remember walking on air, Hank, and the feeling of being square pegs in round holes, but that doesn’t bother me anymore – I’m proud of it! I recognise elements of my married life in the final stanza.

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  3. Togetherness is the way when you got the one and screw what others say in the end.

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  4. You've done a wonderful job of integrating the rhyming words given with your own rhymes and half-rhymes.

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  5. A beautiful dream and wishes, may they all come true:)

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  6. Wonderful execution of rhyme throughout the poem, Hank!💝

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  7. Lovely close - magic indeed.
    Anna :o]

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  8. Enjoyed the way you balanced the sweet with the sharp in this.

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  9. A lovely dance of dreams. For some reason "squaring off" became square dancing in my mind. And how you must follow the lead to create a pattern. I think that fits also the idea of fabric and allowances, the attachments that are sewn together the needlework like fine dance steps. Allowing space so as not to tear apart.

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  10. This is beautiful and I love the rhyme scheme throughout.

    I hope you are safe Hank, I read there is an active volcano your way. Please use caution.

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    1. It is ok Ma'am. We are very safe. Very far away from us

      Hank

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  11. Sometimes people are just made for each other.

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  12. A very nice write. I'm especially pleased with this poem because today my husband and I celebrate our 51st wedding anniversary. Our union has not always been replete with romance, but always with love.

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    1. Wonderful 51st Myrna! Long-lasting and wishing both for many more!

      Hank

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  13. It's so sweet when love passes the tests of time.

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  14. I love the light feeling here Hank! Makes me wistful!

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  15. May the magic always be there as beautiful as this poem.

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  16. Where bliss is found in two in love the poet cannot be silent
    Happy New Year Hank

    Much❤🌷🎈love

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  17. Hi Hank! This reminds me of The famous pair Ginger Rogers and Fred Astaire! Though only a pair on screen. So lovely and serene!

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    1. Yes Jules, great screen dancers as a pair? Who would forget!

      Hank

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  18. Your poem is a lovely dance in itself. Love this Hank!

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