Tuesday, July 7, 2015

Been told it is deadly

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Image: Courtesy of MLMM (here)

Pause a little
Today is the day of reckoning
A fix of weed and
a glass of wine for company
Been told it is deadly
Don't really care

What did I do wrong?
(33 words)

Note: Vinay's prompt  -  to write a 33-word
poem inspired by the word -  today

Vinay's hosting  at A Poem Each Day:
Prompt 37 In a flash #3
Neeraj's at MLMM's Photo
Challenge #68   -  pause
and Marian's The Tuesday Platform
at Real Toads

17 comments:

  1. That's a depressed person who needs help. Very powerful, Hank.

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  2. Don't really care... those three words can tell a lengthy story...

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  3. I feel unhappy but not to that extent.
    Well written Hank.
    Yvonne.

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  4. I hope I never has to rely on those things to cure myself.

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  5. I like the insouciance of "dont really care". When it comes to my glass of wine, I dont either, Hank. Small pleasures are helpful.

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  6. Sure in need of more help that liquor and weed can give

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  7. The last line adds the right punch!

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  8. lost in the dark corners...........................

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  9. no no no no no; one needs to care

    thanks for dropping in at my Monday WRites

    much love...

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  10. Getting lost like that isn't good for anyone

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  11. Hints at a bigger, even sadder, story!

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  12. Yeah, don't care. I think expressing not caring suggests a bit of care.

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  13. You push the lines and it works~

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