Saturday, July 11, 2015

I have trust in them


Image: Courtesy of Tess' Mag #278

MLM's wordle #149 given words:
blown trust high bring  test course 
stick peep trial form mug  

I'm blown away
I have trust in them
How come they leave me
This is high handed to say the least
They can bring themselves to just leave
How can that be

This is a test of my resolve
I have my rights of course
No one's depriving me of that

I'll stick to that 
A peep into my background
and it'll tell them I'm no pushover

A trial of the system is in order 
They can safely form an 
opinion after that 
It is only fair

That last stop was revealing
In fact more frightening to realize
One can get mugged into submission
and no one's the wiser

But a rail station ought to be safe
Someone has to take the lead
Let's get organized!

For Willow's Mag Tales #278 and
Mindlovemisery's Wordle # 149

16 comments:

  1. A smoothly combined double prompt.

    Thanks for visiting.

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  2. Loved the poem Hank, I could have written one like that with similar issues.
    Well done.
    Yvonne.

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  3. It grabs, and holds, you. An imaginative response to the prompt.

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  4. You certainly got all the words. The poem fit the picture.

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  5. trust in one's self can go far, but together much can get done too

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  6. Good job combining these two challenges!

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  7. A creative response to two prompts. Lots of affirmations and self- encouragement here.

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  8. Such Liminal Zones arent they ?

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  9. "...mugged into submission". Wonderful phraseology! ♥

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  10. Hank - this was well done.."mugged into submission" that is a powerful image..I guess I am blown away...well executed...

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  11. I appreciate how you used the prompt words to fit this image, including the sense of not being a pushover. It's not easy to combine prompts but you sure had no problem with making this work!

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  12. Bravo you aced this with the word list too! Delightful read as well!

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