Monday, October 2, 2023

Brushing it Off

                                                                            Author: Pedro Ribeiro Simões 
Image: Making out (here)

A loving couple in all innocence. 
Making it together taking the risks 
inherent in all permutations. But 
some few rudely discover an 
unworthy partner 

Brushing off the bad from the 
good twirling the wheel of fortune.
For  two hearts to elucidate 
their eloquence
(44 words)

Jade Lisa at d'Verse  Quadrille#185-brushing-the-dust-off/
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6 comments:

  1. JadeLiOctober 2, 2023 at 6:21 PM

    Hank, your poem elucidates the state of relationship reality well. If you find the right one you're blessed. If you don't, you'll find yourself on a bumpy road of unknown length...

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  2. AnonymousOctober 2, 2023 at 7:02 PM

    If you find the good one - the wheel has been kind, indeed ~ Truedessa

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  3. rogblog666October 2, 2023 at 11:36 PM

    well put, not all relationships go well

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  4. ChristineOctober 3, 2023 at 11:40 AM

    Hopefully, the bad never returns once the heart falls in love

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  5. GraceOctober 3, 2023 at 6:11 PM

    An unworthy partner is not worth it. Good to brush it off.

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  6. ben AlexanderOctober 4, 2023 at 5:10 AM

    Hank ~ this piece is so true and also true to life...

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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