Tuesday, May 12, 2026

Dreams Of A Couple

                                                                                   Author:Shixart1985
Image: What Could have Been (here)
(courtesy of Wikimedia Commons - licensed under 
the Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic license).

He was not much into romantics, nor an extrovert. Life had been fairly well documented as a teenager and he rode the storm with wits. She was a perfect match pretty, good family and well placed. It could not have been any better. Mutually acceptable but to be given time. 

He excelled in writing, his first love but lacked the talent when it came to mixing well with the crowd. A good conversationalist, confident and well-mannered. He made himself more open and the faint perfume from its chalice steals out more times than allowed. 

Things are cold now. He came to dinner not properly dressed. He was the star player and there was a tie. He had to stay on and was late for dinner. Her parents were there as she had planned a surprise. It was a let-down and nothing further was heard.

Dora at d'Verse - Prosery - Paul Laurence Dunbar
for a maximum of 144 words and to include the line:
"the faint perfume from its chalice steals out more times"

5 comments:

  1. What a let down indeed! The relationship was so full of promise until fate, overtime that is, stepped in. An artful use of the prompt line, Hank, and great storytelling.

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  2. There’s nothing worse than broken dreams, Hank, especially when one tries to fit in. You captured that feeling in your prose.

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  3. Oh, those missed opportunities.... sad case of wrong priorities.

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  4. hmmp... so easily dismissed... i cannot abide something so deep could be left in the shallows.... it is so, one false move and soon forgotten... loved the way you brought the 'line' to the table ...
    https://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2026/05/13/a-thirsty-sip/

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