tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post639037543940775538..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: a tumultuous moment that had his heart racingkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-38593400631429209722015-03-22T21:13:47.755-07:002015-03-22T21:13:47.755-07:00Aww. What a sweet, sad story. Though I hope that a...Aww. What a sweet, sad story. Though I hope that after this he would be able to move on himself -- finally. It sounds like it's time.Caryn Caldwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15338655819410392107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-48059773355371029042015-03-20T08:47:47.985-07:002015-03-20T08:47:47.985-07:00Hi there!
I'm stopping by as many blogs as I ...Hi there!<br /><br />I'm stopping by as many blogs as I can while getting ready for the A to Z Challenge next month. Good luck with the challenge and if you get a chance, why not stop by my blog at http://www.donnalmartin.com? I write children's books, middle grade and young adult...<br /><br />Take care,<br /><br />Donna L MartinDonna L Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17553676457762998807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-8553689544716201182015-03-20T08:23:26.755-07:002015-03-20T08:23:26.755-07:00Sad story, but ture to life. The sun will shine e...Sad story, but ture to life. The sun will shine eventually.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-69051366755074373582015-03-20T03:49:20.886-07:002015-03-20T03:49:20.886-07:00The pain of the old flame, great story poem.The pain of the old flame, great story poem.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-5250681226338461462015-03-19T20:39:10.104-07:002015-03-19T20:39:10.104-07:00Wonderfully told Hank, he quietly fades into the s...Wonderfully told Hank, he quietly fades into the sun..how sad..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-80585603734639267762015-03-19T16:43:16.096-07:002015-03-19T16:43:16.096-07:00Hank,
At first reading, I expected that fairy-tal...Hank,<br /><br />At first reading, I expected that fairy-tale ending..The reality of course is closer to the real pains in relationships and life..An awkward meeting, with sunshine not noticed in the end!!<br /><br />Eileen<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-11092625037267757002015-03-19T14:52:52.643-07:002015-03-19T14:52:52.643-07:00Nice story Hank ~ Maybe its time to move on, smil...Nice story Hank ~ Maybe its time to move on, smiles ~<br /><br />GraceScarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-7029171107455979832015-03-19T08:40:07.491-07:002015-03-19T08:40:07.491-07:00Poor guy needs to move onPoor guy needs to move onHoly Ghost Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16107809586103198047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16429000144563297352015-03-19T08:15:08.987-07:002015-03-19T08:15:08.987-07:00Time to look elsewhere methinks!Time to look elsewhere methinks!keiths ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.co.uk/2015/03/james-has-plan.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-58365451868344001732015-03-19T03:59:06.271-07:002015-03-19T03:59:06.271-07:00Sometimes we just have to learn to let go. Sometimes we just have to learn to let go. Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-5430351768303426022015-03-19T02:33:04.547-07:002015-03-19T02:33:04.547-07:00at least there was closure now... hope he can find...at least there was closure now... hope he can find someone to share his coffee with :-)totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-89851026851459309442015-03-18T22:21:19.643-07:002015-03-18T22:21:19.643-07:00A soul stirring story, Hank. Great setting...I cou...A soul stirring story, Hank. Great setting...I could picture it in my mind. So lovely!Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-36056913963189409602015-03-18T20:42:32.334-07:002015-03-18T20:42:32.334-07:00a wonderful story Hank...a wonderful story Hank...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-36850605939700995672015-03-18T16:32:31.921-07:002015-03-18T16:32:31.921-07:00Time for the guy to move on indeed, she sure did.Time for the guy to move on indeed, she sure did.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-15224114737118174652015-03-18T15:55:20.783-07:002015-03-18T15:55:20.783-07:00Foolish man! Ten years is a long time and did he n...Foolish man! Ten years is a long time and did he not think she would be wiser than him and move on? I loved the setting of poem, how you told and the feelings aroused but they were all in his mind not hers. Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-56949100699714915572015-03-18T15:01:13.839-07:002015-03-18T15:01:13.839-07:00Oh this is a well told story - him quietly moving ...Oh this is a well told story - him quietly moving away unseen........sad. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-30618715643598662892015-03-18T14:15:37.516-07:002015-03-18T14:15:37.516-07:00I love the imagery in your poem!
xoxoI love the imagery in your poem! <br />xoxoSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-80629300867625073432015-03-18T14:09:59.085-07:002015-03-18T14:09:59.085-07:00"Find another coffee shop" might be a go..."Find another coffee shop" might be a good metaphor for life in general. Our time is too short to waste on either fantasies or grudges. Ann (bunnygirl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-82395786374745342642015-03-18T12:47:03.697-07:002015-03-18T12:47:03.697-07:00What a psychological drama here, Hank! Intriguing ...What a psychological drama here, Hank! Intriguing story...humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-56183946699586440552015-03-18T11:19:40.362-07:002015-03-18T11:19:40.362-07:00Great but sad story, excellently written and a ple...Great but sad story, excellently written and a pleasure to read.nashvillecats2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02326956741209246895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-65697943703914825792015-03-18T10:25:26.240-07:002015-03-18T10:25:26.240-07:00aw how sad hopefully he'll put that past relat...aw how sad hopefully he'll put that past relationship to rest though now and find a new one.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-5932277429897634722015-03-18T09:39:45.557-07:002015-03-18T09:39:45.557-07:00Sometimes you have to wake up..smell the coffee......Sometimes you have to wake up..smell the coffee...take in the sunshine and find another coffee shop! Nicely done Hank Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-92151395859245225402015-03-18T09:21:40.517-07:002015-03-18T09:21:40.517-07:00Good story, Hank, if not exactly sun-centered or c...Good story, Hank, if not exactly sun-centered or containing a sun motif or imagery. The ambiance of this place changed in an instant--and a heart started and stopped again.. Ouch.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com