tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post1771535325976396304..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Limericks 6kaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-30815400538964689232011-11-18T12:23:41.371-08:002011-11-18T12:23:41.371-08:00Loved the limmericks Hank , wish I could write the...Loved the limmericks Hank , wish I could write them, I once knew a man in Ireland who wrote limmerick books,<br /><br />Have a good week-end.<br />Yvonne.RHYTHM AND RHYMEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11386975261804630799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-4179922743356419352011-11-18T05:25:17.118-08:002011-11-18T05:25:17.118-08:00Dear Pramoda,
This is a Limerick. Go to Mad Kane&#...Dear Pramoda,<br />This is a Limerick. Go to Mad Kane's Humor blog and know more.<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-46798258647648704812011-11-18T05:18:51.336-08:002011-11-18T05:18:51.336-08:00i have no idea which form of the poem it is..! int...i have no idea which form of the poem it is..! interesting and thoughtful!Pramoda Medurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04513152092118282205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-79288654513969269082011-11-18T01:24:48.647-08:002011-11-18T01:24:48.647-08:00Great laughs. Thoroughly enjoyable.Great laughs. Thoroughly enjoyable.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-55886275101743374002011-11-17T17:19:55.778-08:002011-11-17T17:19:55.778-08:00oo you have to watch what you let slip...haha...fu...oo you have to watch what you let slip...haha...fun limericks hank...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-69750973030398695842011-11-17T15:04:24.508-08:002011-11-17T15:04:24.508-08:00Untold pleasure and skirt-chasing -- what fun blog...Untold pleasure and skirt-chasing -- what fun blog topics. :) :) Then loss and leaving.<br /><br />Ahhhh, love and such.Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-77074526487672113792011-11-17T10:37:19.990-08:002011-11-17T10:37:19.990-08:00This is really, really close, Hank. Just watch the...This is really, really close, Hank. Just watch the rhyming, AABBA. The first two lines have to rhyme with each other and with the last line.<br />Always happy to help, especially as I can see you enjoying the process. If your limericks flow properly, people will find they're memorizing them without even trying.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-30980642387245294362011-11-17T09:37:22.612-08:002011-11-17T09:37:22.612-08:00Kay,
It's amazing! You put through a great ide...Kay,<br />It's amazing! You put through a great idea of consistency. There's now a semblance of discipline in the creation. I've a quick 88558 as a test case below but with a rather flat humor. I was trying hard to make it better. Needs more practice looks like! Here goes!<br /><br />Mad Kane creates a revolution<br />Pat came in right on very strong<br />Kay is not outdone<br />Hank in lots of fun<br />A grouping of like minds is born<br /><br />Thanks a lot, Ma'am, for going that extra mile! I'm beginning to see lots of fun in Limericks right now!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-39914400611200464012011-11-17T08:37:49.995-08:002011-11-17T08:37:49.995-08:00Hi Hank—I can tell you're enjoying the limeric...Hi Hank—I can tell you're enjoying the limerick form, so maybe I can offer a little tip? If you count the number of beats in a line, and follow the rhyme pattern AABBA, it should work every time. I've written an example (not to be taken seriously). The syllables can be 88558, or 88448, or 99559, etc., as long as they're consistent. The last line can, as a joke, run a lot longer (I haven't done that here, however). Cheers, K<br /><br />There once was a young man named Hank<br />Who took his pay check to the bank<br />The banker said no<br />This firm’s in escrow<br />And they have their big boss to thankKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-10113668556142412892011-11-17T08:17:33.393-08:002011-11-17T08:17:33.393-08:00Hey.. loved your writing style in this one :) :)Hey.. loved your writing style in this one :) :)Madhulikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03117132402215436632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-52867924561325688832011-11-17T06:24:44.210-08:002011-11-17T06:24:44.210-08:00Some more great limericks from you
That much is ce...Some more great limericks from you<br />That much is certainly true<br />Oh such fun<br />Now I'm done<br />And know there will be more to viewPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com