tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post1009003930587850323..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Forgotten better days - A Bopkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-54807564824764709512017-08-05T08:36:31.427-07:002017-08-05T08:36:31.427-07:00Delicious lines Hank - especially "Gathering ...Delicious lines Hank - especially "Gathering dark rain clouds above a tell-tale sign<br />Stifle the distraction to nip it in the bud"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-1160033006082166932017-08-04T22:59:38.312-07:002017-08-04T22:59:38.312-07:00Can certainly relate to this Hank. Great verse.
Y...Can certainly relate to this Hank. Great verse.<br /><br />Yvonne.nashvillecats2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02326956741209246895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-68432821656531285302017-08-04T17:46:06.796-07:002017-08-04T17:46:06.796-07:00Oddly familiar. Perhaps this is something we all c...Oddly familiar. Perhaps this is something we all can relate to. Well captured, Hank.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-91930917322554847662017-08-04T14:15:39.845-07:002017-08-04T14:15:39.845-07:00All attitude! The turning of the voice and the pe...All attitude! The turning of the voice and the personification element gives this that strength of tone. Extra points for using stultify - an often overlooked word. I'm thrilled that you completed this.<br />Note: If you would care to join in with the August Challenge you are welcome to go to https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/08/04/casting-bricks-jillys-august-challenge/ Casting Bricks and click on Mr. Linky to post this completed poem. Others will enjoy reading your outstanding collaboration. You are also welcome to pose a challenge of your own and post it there.<br />Note 2: The 28 Days of Unreason is a bit relxed. I didn't do a link, just encouraging fellow poets to write, post and let me know. In all honesty, the response has been greater than I expected. Jillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14971432705586726610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-52563970993911268042017-08-04T12:24:43.061-07:002017-08-04T12:24:43.061-07:00Sometimes we sure have to push through, forgetting...Sometimes we sure have to push through, forgetting the past and finding something new.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com