tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post8701118293804595263..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: a cinch it'll fulfill life's sanctitykaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-44645968074503139712018-11-17T16:35:16.610-08:002018-11-17T16:35:16.610-08:00Namaste my friend - Kind thoughts, kind words, kin...Namaste my friend - Kind thoughts, kind words, kind heartTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-46046501384965004992018-11-14T12:45:30.292-08:002018-11-14T12:45:30.292-08:00a bud about to bloom - no directions - it just doe...a bud about to bloom - no directions - it just does. Prayers really should be like that - not seeking but just asking for acceptance...Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-13589988168673384152018-11-14T05:51:02.257-08:002018-11-14T05:51:02.257-08:00I love this, the "Namaste, Suwadeekap" g...I love this, the "Namaste, Suwadeekap" got me! I love foreign language and these words got me! stevevhanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07173497558725136424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-36702745027261686952018-11-14T01:08:26.256-08:002018-11-14T01:08:26.256-08:00I love the lines:
'like a sleepy child in snow...I love the lines:<br />'like a sleepy child in snow drift amidst the junk<br />a bud about to bloom without directions'.<br />Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-36143342460725003152018-11-13T18:11:14.404-08:002018-11-13T18:11:14.404-08:00like a sleepy child in snow drift amidst the junk....like a sleepy child in snow drift amidst the junk...Love that lineKBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-22479803078132989302018-11-13T18:03:26.845-08:002018-11-13T18:03:26.845-08:00Especially love the close hank.. a bud about to bl...Especially love the close hank.. a bud about to bloom without directions...lovely!Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-14963194246834897462018-11-13T12:55:55.783-08:002018-11-13T12:55:55.783-08:00Love the way you end this poem HankLove the way you end this poem Hankbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-9734010170136529982018-11-13T03:19:33.086-08:002018-11-13T03:19:33.086-08:00I love how you explored the clasping of hands...an...I love how you explored the clasping of hands...an intriguing journey into the subconscious indeed! Vivian Zemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09588008375525403964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-77936921234914534082018-11-13T02:27:35.059-08:002018-11-13T02:27:35.059-08:00Ah, I too love how you turned the subject matter, ...Ah, I too love how you turned the subject matter, a sign of greeting, into this nuanced observation. I liked this bit in particular: "fine line trending devoid of emotions/like a sleepy child in snow drift amidst the junk".Anmol (HA)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02427056865589377093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-2231209904449525752018-11-12T19:09:27.853-08:002018-11-12T19:09:27.853-08:00Love how you merged each prompt here, Hank.Love how you merged each prompt here, Hank.Vickihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09672155500954306779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-67721431537333088312018-11-12T14:46:18.662-08:002018-11-12T14:46:18.662-08:00Very truly spoken Hank! Love what you did with the...Very truly spoken Hank! Love what you did with the prompt!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-91821724737544323792018-11-12T11:37:19.907-08:002018-11-12T11:37:19.907-08:00Have to walk between the line many a time indeedHave to walk between the line many a time indeedPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-37602290109431468762018-11-12T10:23:25.263-08:002018-11-12T10:23:25.263-08:00You combined these two prompts so smoothly. Great...You combined these two prompts so smoothly. Great poem.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.com