tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post8285472862282068211..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Stormy Encounterkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-68698452709497584162013-06-08T09:32:54.379-07:002013-06-08T09:32:54.379-07:00It was a resurgent of the area of disaster
within ...It was a resurgent of the area of disaster<br />within a clear-headed self in a day and a half. <br /><br />Funny, it takes me much longer than that ; ). Great stuff, sir. We should all continue unsparingly soaked and skidding along...<br />Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-14991548745411435562013-06-08T07:22:59.887-07:002013-06-08T07:22:59.887-07:00Oh well done Hank! We are indeed emotion-wise, co...Oh well done Hank! We are indeed emotion-wise, comparable to the forces of nature that dictate our weather.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-23170073718357688422013-06-08T06:25:17.390-07:002013-06-08T06:25:17.390-07:00Ha. Well done. You've used the cut-up in a w...Ha. Well done. You've used the cut-up in a way to open up the poem, and yet you have your own voice. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-74299687574570440302013-06-07T23:23:33.920-07:002013-06-07T23:23:33.920-07:00Hank, YOU are a force of nature! You nailed this ...Hank, YOU are a force of nature! You nailed this prompt by using a topical theme - the upheaval of Oklahoma and other states by recent storms - and portraying them as emotions. This is brilliant stuff, Hank, I mean it. I saw the prompt and thought, "No way." Then I see this and think, damn, I should have at least tried... but nothing could compare. BRILL. AmelitaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-57359452239277464362013-06-07T19:41:08.345-07:002013-06-07T19:41:08.345-07:00Emotions have a way of weathering you, literally a...Emotions have a way of weathering you, literally and figuratively. Great job weaving the source text into this gem. -MikeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-11514945259627655392013-06-07T16:21:14.729-07:002013-06-07T16:21:14.729-07:00Hank,
This is a wonderful poem woven within the f...Hank,<br /><br />This is a wonderful poem woven within the forces of nature. I enjoyed reading this one from start to end.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-5684082165274861622013-06-07T13:02:41.780-07:002013-06-07T13:02:41.780-07:00Him becoming nature itself, nicely done at your sh...Him becoming nature itself, nicely done at your shelfPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-66482785974800328212013-06-07T08:19:07.212-07:002013-06-07T08:19:07.212-07:00What a clever idea with great results. Beautiful i...What a clever idea with great results. Beautiful imagery.Grandma`s Goulashhttp://www.grandmas-goulash.infonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-27649677897356558232013-06-07T08:01:04.472-07:002013-06-07T08:01:04.472-07:00emotions and the strength they possess..emotions and the strength they possess..Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-37602550377770988312013-06-07T06:27:22.657-07:002013-06-07T06:27:22.657-07:00You worked this out very smoothly Hank ~ I didn&#...You worked this out very smoothly Hank ~ I didn't even feel you cut this up from the stormy news ~ I like the strong personification of nature - heart tornadoes, flooded with denial, stormy encounters ~ Time to move on ~<br /><br />GraceScarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-84868426513139878472013-06-07T03:34:38.816-07:002013-06-07T03:34:38.816-07:00good morning hank...nicely done...the rains sweepi...good morning hank...nicely done...the rains sweeping north into his head...the personification of nature..well played and surpised at how well it flowed...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-82327812857324073882013-06-07T03:12:21.522-07:002013-06-07T03:12:21.522-07:00The weather can be emotionless until it is given f...The weather can be emotionless until it is given formHoly Ghost Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16107809586103198047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-2344863544064529782013-06-07T02:27:29.439-07:002013-06-07T02:27:29.439-07:00This is pure poetry... I could not tell the random...This is pure poetry... I could not tell the randomness in the process.. It worked very well with the mixture of emotions of weather. Well done :-)brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-41607704700892224452013-06-07T02:07:32.089-07:002013-06-07T02:07:32.089-07:00Moved on finally the storm falls silent. I loved t...Moved on finally the storm falls silent. I loved the way you worked the fury of thoughts hereTCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-80522446503348266312013-06-07T01:01:44.630-07:002013-06-07T01:01:44.630-07:00Great combination of the personal and the imperson...Great combination of the personal and the impersonal! It's funny how many weather-related metaphors we use in our daily lives.Marina Sofiahttp://findingtimetowrite.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16379295155538169992013-06-06T21:52:03.725-07:002013-06-06T21:52:03.725-07:00Great choice, and i like the weather emotions. I a...Great choice, and i like the weather emotions. I always used to love listening to the shipping forecast as a child, it always sounded so mysterious.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-37961297964133098592013-06-06T21:23:48.381-07:002013-06-06T21:23:48.381-07:00nice...love how you personificate the nature power...nice...love how you personificate the nature powers and make them a part of his emotions..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-84825578350470582482013-06-06T21:15:15.079-07:002013-06-06T21:15:15.079-07:00"tornadoes of feel" ... I love that!"tornadoes of feel" ... I love that!henna inkhttp://fadinghennaink.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-24386546813793007192013-06-06T21:15:12.351-07:002013-06-06T21:15:12.351-07:00I think you've done a wonderful job using the ...I think you've done a wonderful job using the method and interlacing weather and a personage. The narrative is very interesting considering where It is pulling together from such a random process.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.com