tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post8042691294783599241..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: the heat of summer dulls the initiativekaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-9651372825539550512017-07-08T13:53:52.351-07:002017-07-08T13:53:52.351-07:00you stated it so well that I can just add a lazy: ...you stated it so well that I can just add a lazy: "Agreed"Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-17030412100775739682017-07-08T08:41:46.693-07:002017-07-08T08:41:46.693-07:00Ice cream for a summer dulled initiative...perfect...Ice cream for a summer dulled initiative...perfect choiceSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-65489997713203380332017-07-08T05:50:32.491-07:002017-07-08T05:50:32.491-07:00Sure can work to help beat the heatSure can work to help beat the heatPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-40053358702481738602017-07-08T02:54:51.085-07:002017-07-08T02:54:51.085-07:00Dulls the initiative yet fires the performance.Dulls the initiative yet fires the performance.Brendanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983584155125369291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-55289698810406837972017-07-07T19:51:34.387-07:002017-07-07T19:51:34.387-07:00I enjoyed the read Hank albeit late, it has been v...I enjoyed the read Hank albeit late, it has been very hot here, your verse says it all.<br /><br />Yvonne.nashvillecats2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02326956741209246895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-72017554250977555592017-07-07T17:38:46.081-07:002017-07-07T17:38:46.081-07:00insisting on shrill cries where others dread
to ...insisting on shrill cries where others dread <br /><br />to me, this captures the intensity and persistence of crickets - and in this piece, it sings to me of heat - absolute stifling heat - love the placement in the poem - WildChild47https://www.blogger.com/profile/05903357601592060653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-32298751496119069342017-07-07T17:11:37.624-07:002017-07-07T17:11:37.624-07:00Coke floats!? Are you bribing me to say this is a ...Coke floats!? Are you bribing me to say this is a goof poem? <br />OK, you win.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-64397156237850690512017-07-07T15:29:15.569-07:002017-07-07T15:29:15.569-07:00I really like the third stanza about the cricket -...I really like the third stanza about the cricket - and an ice cream float is always welcome.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-3683070173285716202017-07-07T14:12:42.786-07:002017-07-07T14:12:42.786-07:00Ice cream is perfect for summer.
www.ficklemillen...Ice cream is perfect for summer.<br /><br />www.ficklemillennial.comGina Gaohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09032273127593718883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-76704914213027092232017-07-07T13:34:07.653-07:002017-07-07T13:34:07.653-07:00I think that ice-cream is a perfect cure.I think that ice-cream is a perfect cure.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-10567263687048405132017-07-07T11:07:30.604-07:002017-07-07T11:07:30.604-07:00Ah, you made the sounds and tastes of summer come ...Ah, you made the sounds and tastes of summer come alive.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-6332522451557330272017-07-07T11:00:34.958-07:002017-07-07T11:00:34.958-07:00Birds, crickets and coke floats. I haven't had...Birds, crickets and coke floats. I haven't had a coke float in years. I think I need oneDebi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.com