tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post6836963799070254561..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Bidding for just a fleeting glimpsekaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-10656930486904350332016-02-17T09:59:45.296-08:002016-02-17T09:59:45.296-08:00Living next to each
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aWay.. UniVerse...Living next to each<br />otHeR UniVerse<br />aWay.. UniVerse<br />so cold iN dArk..<br />so wArm iN<br />heArts liGht..<br />LiGht first<br />Truth<br />neXt..<br />Love over<br />WiSdom flYs <br />aS oNe.. N0W..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-33758724726173352862016-02-13T12:31:40.669-08:002016-02-13T12:31:40.669-08:00I like how you describe that feeling of truly miss...I like how you describe that feeling of truly missing someone, of the faint hope within that sense of loneliness.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-88520718107912859932016-02-13T06:55:23.027-08:002016-02-13T06:55:23.027-08:00The loneliness is palpable in your words.
I like t...The loneliness is palpable in your words.<br />I like the idea of twinkling stars -- that their twinkle is their way of trying to get a fleeting glimpse of the earth. Beautiful!lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-58688888639315625422016-02-12T09:16:46.747-08:002016-02-12T09:16:46.747-08:00twinkling stars, night's warmth and her loneli...twinkling stars, night's warmth and her loneliness make it all the more sad...a beautiful Rondel Hank...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-15682365197548375342016-02-12T06:37:54.402-08:002016-02-12T06:37:54.402-08:00The feeling of being alone with beauty can sure dr...The feeling of being alone with beauty can sure drive some to sadnessPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-600965911630419292016-02-12T06:10:24.175-08:002016-02-12T06:10:24.175-08:00The feeling of strong isolation is felt here. Very...The feeling of strong isolation is felt here. Very good!Carol Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09366366047409134966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-91518629115845569102016-02-12T05:55:05.155-08:002016-02-12T05:55:05.155-08:00I can feel the yearning in these stanzas, Hank! T...I can feel the yearning in these stanzas, Hank! The twinkling stars create a wonderful atmosphere.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-1263459977156552482016-02-12T04:54:45.617-08:002016-02-12T04:54:45.617-08:00The angst of waiting for the beau ~ At least she ...The angst of waiting for the beau ~ At least she can get a glimpse of the twinkling stars ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-12806263448256281742016-02-12T04:36:33.171-08:002016-02-12T04:36:33.171-08:00Such a wonderfully expressive Rondel :DSuch a wonderfully expressive Rondel :DSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-23714448207435743172016-02-12T03:25:32.459-08:002016-02-12T03:25:32.459-08:00You've used the form beautifully; very express...You've used the form beautifully; very expressive.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16108394129271341462016-02-12T03:09:50.339-08:002016-02-12T03:09:50.339-08:00I can relate to loneliness only to well Hank.
Wond...I can relate to loneliness only to well Hank.<br />Wonderful write.<br />Yvonne.nashvillecats2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02326956741209246895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-23876997849922873072016-02-12T00:28:29.656-08:002016-02-12T00:28:29.656-08:00Somehow loneliness is stronger when all around the...Somehow loneliness is stronger when all around there is beauty and no-one to share it with.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-25413583491985643312016-02-11T22:08:11.050-08:002016-02-11T22:08:11.050-08:00I agree with Gayle and De...there is a balance of ...I agree with Gayle and De...there is a balance of sorts in this poem and 8 syllables helps.Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-34670389665691391392016-02-11T20:09:38.849-08:002016-02-11T20:09:38.849-08:00Such loneliness here, and yet the word "twink...Such loneliness here, and yet the word "twinkling" brings a glimmer of hope. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-13931556942982683322016-02-11T20:02:50.765-08:002016-02-11T20:02:50.765-08:00I can feel the strong despair here, Hank. Your re...I can feel the strong despair here, Hank. Your repeating refrain "Bidding for just a fleeting glimpse" drives home the loneliness. I like that you took up the challenge of 8 syllables, well done!Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.com