tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post6033663443470142193..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: he wished he could learn more kaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-72584048047460235392016-11-19T04:22:11.053-08:002016-11-19T04:22:11.053-08:00I had comments from someone I had never heard of b...I had comments from someone I had never heard of before, now everyone is entitled to their own opinion but to be rude, hurtful of my situation I was going through I stopped blogging for a week. One can give critique without hurting the others feeling surely.<br />Great post Hank.<br />Yvonne.nashvillecats2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02326956741209246895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-90847746059313424212016-11-18T22:53:27.888-08:002016-11-18T22:53:27.888-08:00There is such a difference between critique and cr...There is such a difference between critique and criticism, but there are so many lessons in each. It is intriguing and a growing experience to rub elbows with those who create art.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-66257590269009728822016-11-17T21:52:08.036-08:002016-11-17T21:52:08.036-08:00His acknowledged fear made me smile. I think most...His acknowledged fear made me smile. I think most of us can relate. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-81322657418734071232016-11-17T01:05:57.946-08:002016-11-17T01:05:57.946-08:00Like it Critique is good as long as it is construc...Like it Critique is good as long as it is constructive and it's the same for praise. Indeed there are no shortcuts to become a writer but<br />you don't do shortcuts heh<br />Writng for me is just play and I somehow find it cool to hang out with real writersMarjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-77821189170860253982016-11-16T21:57:29.347-08:002016-11-16T21:57:29.347-08:00This was a fun read, Hank. Speaking of "He d...This was a fun read, Hank. Speaking of "He did present himself as a bibliotaph," we have a saying about our Aggies (Texas A&M college, students or alumni) "They have books but they eat the paper."<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-10181169885165900332016-11-16T06:59:59.233-08:002016-11-16T06:59:59.233-08:00Yes... it really is helpful to be critiqued or eve...Yes... it really is helpful to be critiqued or even criticized. Love the recognition of the initial terror, and then the desire for more critique. I can relate!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-30449267876343103902016-11-15T19:13:53.360-08:002016-11-15T19:13:53.360-08:00Very brave to invite the critics. Very brave to invite the critics. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-35666841117322053732016-11-15T12:38:50.625-08:002016-11-15T12:38:50.625-08:00Not to easy to take critique, but even harder to g...Not to easy to take critique, but even harder to givebrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-12239187523651439682016-11-15T11:58:42.441-08:002016-11-15T11:58:42.441-08:00That does sound like the agony of learning the cra...That does sound like the agony of learning the craft of writing.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-50252548308507309552016-11-15T10:06:41.764-08:002016-11-15T10:06:41.764-08:00Brave soul, to welcome the critiques! You do so we...Brave soul, to welcome the critiques! You do so well with the wordles, Hank. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-42787165490920681052016-11-15T08:47:51.777-08:002016-11-15T08:47:51.777-08:00Critiques can be quite a touchstone. Well written!...Critiques can be quite a touchstone. Well written! SuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-20066661583137112622016-11-15T07:34:57.416-08:002016-11-15T07:34:57.416-08:00Yes, I too love constructive critique but not hars...Yes, I too love constructive critique but not harsh... I take that too personally, I'm afraid.Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-82622872266266922292016-11-15T07:29:04.036-08:002016-11-15T07:29:04.036-08:00Ahh yes, your poem is sharply felt by those of us ...Ahh yes, your poem is sharply felt by those of us seeking to craft a life out of writing. There are no shortcuts to the truths we feel and are compelled to share. I think we need both the positive & the harsh critiques to keep us going...Stacie Eirichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13889951415294858821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-73907732856384570652016-11-15T06:39:35.122-08:002016-11-15T06:39:35.122-08:00Yeah, I agree with Tim. This is really good. But I...Yeah, I agree with Tim. This is really good. But I'll remember that in the future. ;)<br /><br />This is my favorite: "revealing a penetralia of sharp<br />wisdom"✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-59022369299615310012016-11-15T06:09:30.076-08:002016-11-15T06:09:30.076-08:00Can't give you a harsh critique on this one, c...Can't give you a harsh critique on this one, cuz it's just too good.Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-10967440595671673682016-11-15T05:06:40.332-08:002016-11-15T05:06:40.332-08:00Critique is invaluable, though terrifying at first...Critique is invaluable, though terrifying at first, agree! great use of the prompt words. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-27114181332558661782016-11-15T04:22:16.743-08:002016-11-15T04:22:16.743-08:0011 out of 12 is not bad at all given your skill in...11 out of 12 is not bad at all given your skill inthe craft, i long time now stopped responding to those given word prompts. They stimulated me for a while and that was good but i realise its not my strong point<br />But well done to you<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-75470946687931864482016-11-15T04:00:06.579-08:002016-11-15T04:00:06.579-08:00Well I don't even try these fearsomely difficu...Well I don't even try these fearsomely difficult-looking wordie things, so full marks for having a go, at least!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-77239600039971052122016-11-15T01:55:51.137-08:002016-11-15T01:55:51.137-08:00you wend through the narrative just like the wiste...you wend through the narrative just like the wisteria - enjoyable meter to read. Sorry I can't be harsherAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-52515952100623711492016-11-14T18:58:18.546-08:002016-11-14T18:58:18.546-08:00#7 was clicked by mistake. Pl ignore!
Hank#7 was clicked by mistake. Pl ignore!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-7353441713813637142016-11-14T16:29:43.149-08:002016-11-14T16:29:43.149-08:00Absolutely right Martin! Thanks! He brings himself...Absolutely right Martin! Thanks! He brings himself to a higher level<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-23685879210654852792016-11-14T15:48:50.742-08:002016-11-14T15:48:50.742-08:00Marvelous expression. It is through the criticism ...Marvelous expression. It is through the criticism the artist growsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-12262636806530910142016-11-14T14:04:23.028-08:002016-11-14T14:04:23.028-08:00Thanks Cloudia!
HankThanks Cloudia!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-76167879835209412722016-11-14T13:56:32.433-08:002016-11-14T13:56:32.433-08:00You are very right there, Pat. Thanks!
HankYou are very right there, Pat. Thanks!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-91764641930228309912016-11-14T13:27:42.024-08:002016-11-14T13:27:42.024-08:00You are an engaged artist and thinker, HankYou are an engaged artist and thinker, HankCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.com