tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post5888272766758935282..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: a man with a boxing glovekaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-56826916632573303532015-08-18T20:42:57.244-07:002015-08-18T20:42:57.244-07:00Both very well done -- but oh, that sneaky fox! Both very well done -- but oh, that sneaky fox! Blog It Or Lose Ithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16386952096217793342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-20943057613245535772015-08-18T14:50:19.583-07:002015-08-18T14:50:19.583-07:00Great use of form the meanings carried well.Great use of form the meanings carried well.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-72550485341023141212015-08-18T12:46:00.100-07:002015-08-18T12:46:00.100-07:00Wonderfully executed style (both).
ZQWonderfully executed style (both).<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-42140421854237737602015-08-17T15:15:02.786-07:002015-08-17T15:15:02.786-07:00Like both of them and I am always interested in le...Like both of them and I am always interested in learning syllabic forms. Thank you,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-2759308150628981072015-08-17T03:47:50.202-07:002015-08-17T03:47:50.202-07:00I loved the Shadorma which told us how the flying ...I loved the Shadorma which told us how the flying fox survives by being sensible without making a show of finding food to eat. With the Joseph's star it is probably slightly better to punched with boxing glove than with a fist!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-43920235622009636712015-08-16T16:04:01.711-07:002015-08-16T16:04:01.711-07:00You know what they say a fox can be sly..
I think...You know what they say a fox can be sly..<br /><br />I think sometimes in life we do have to fight back...depends on the circumstances..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-62035034329655271642015-08-16T15:38:35.045-07:002015-08-16T15:38:35.045-07:00yes, fighting back is mandatory in some circumstan...yes, fighting back is mandatory in some circumstances.<br /><br />enjoyed the first poem too - the observations are quite truetotomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-37072369041699219092015-08-16T13:44:18.348-07:002015-08-16T13:44:18.348-07:00Sometimes we have to fight back.
Great words Hank....Sometimes we have to fight back.<br />Great words Hank.<br />Yvonne.nashvillecats2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02326956741209246895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-50944216907201677392015-08-16T12:28:30.921-07:002015-08-16T12:28:30.921-07:00Now these were interesting forms new to me...love ...Now these were interesting forms new to me...love learning abut new things...and you created some wonderful poems Hank!Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-78884920237111045922015-08-16T12:27:56.725-07:002015-08-16T12:27:56.725-07:00I love the idea of the flying fox nibbling on frui...I love the idea of the flying fox nibbling on fruits.....Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-30346216855256844652015-08-16T11:52:02.035-07:002015-08-16T11:52:02.035-07:00Ah I like both these forms--3/5/7 seem to be grea...Ah I like both these forms--3/5/7 seem to be great numbers for poetryAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-50112430964156895912015-08-16T08:18:02.497-07:002015-08-16T08:18:02.497-07:00Maybe pushing someone against the wall is not the ...Maybe pushing someone against the wall is not the best way to avoid the words of fists.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-12633948079018519972015-08-16T07:43:18.037-07:002015-08-16T07:43:18.037-07:00i love boxing , and i can tell you that there is a...i love boxing , and i can tell you that there is a lot of poetry in thereSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-34948700087229614172015-08-16T07:32:01.822-07:002015-08-16T07:32:01.822-07:00very enjoyable lines...love them all...very enjoyable lines...love them all...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-17330581427298988242015-08-16T06:25:46.161-07:002015-08-16T06:25:46.161-07:00Loved both the forms :D so intriguing!
Well penne...Loved both the forms :D so intriguing! <br />Well penned :DSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-56642377601585976182015-08-16T05:56:57.461-07:002015-08-16T05:56:57.461-07:00Ah, when pushed to the wall, what choice does he h...Ah, when pushed to the wall, what choice does he have?Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-68873334862850282022015-08-16T05:35:13.156-07:002015-08-16T05:35:13.156-07:00interesting structures.. and interesting poems.interesting structures.. and interesting poems.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-57668299473385122052015-08-16T05:25:48.041-07:002015-08-16T05:25:48.041-07:00Love the way these two pieces sneak around until t...Love the way these two pieces sneak around until they get to the punch. And the forms are perfect for a sports theme, since it allows lovers and strangers alike to enjoy it.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-42332175085156640182015-08-16T04:44:55.571-07:002015-08-16T04:44:55.571-07:00oh i love the first one best, its like giving us a...oh i love the first one best, its like giving us a riddle; I got it i got it the answer is: FRUIT BATS<br /><br />have a nice Sunday<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-3225392034983917402015-08-16T02:09:08.783-07:002015-08-16T02:09:08.783-07:00There can be the subtle, slow eating away and the ...There can be the subtle, slow eating away and the more explicit, physical conflict. Both need a reaction to preserve individual integrity. Interesting poems.Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-45547703077605531412015-08-15T11:40:44.496-07:002015-08-15T11:40:44.496-07:00Like the comparison of the fox to human nature ;-)...Like the comparison of the fox to human nature ;-)C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-18334729764061304012015-08-15T09:40:30.455-07:002015-08-15T09:40:30.455-07:00Relating the analogy of some people 'nibbling&...Relating the analogy of some people 'nibbling' on other's assets on the quiet leaving a trail of 'heart-breaks'<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-44271427005385456042015-08-15T08:39:56.555-07:002015-08-15T08:39:56.555-07:00I'm not sure I completely follow the first poe...I'm not sure I completely follow the first poem but I definitely enjoyed the second one. Got me thinking.H.R. Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01462784064936801201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-57017940861233314762015-08-15T07:20:36.719-07:002015-08-15T07:20:36.719-07:00Both are well done! I can't imagine trying to ...Both are well done! I can't imagine trying to make words fit into such requirements.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-47022137047566005972015-08-15T05:51:14.918-07:002015-08-15T05:51:14.918-07:00We can't win them all, but we can tryWe can't win them all, but we can tryHoly Ghost Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16107809586103198047noreply@blogger.com