tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post5372528887338483311..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Sunday Whirl Wordle #124kaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-63413514494007492062013-09-02T17:10:31.196-07:002013-09-02T17:10:31.196-07:00great results!
ZQgreat results!<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-50572001374488894872013-09-02T15:32:06.637-07:002013-09-02T15:32:06.637-07:00Good story Hank, yes we should look after things b...Good story Hank, yes we should look after things before they explode wouldn't want that.ScottlBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09147326078011352857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-37704550607069023772013-09-02T09:39:14.976-07:002013-09-02T09:39:14.976-07:00A potentially dangerous situation! Nice work with...A potentially dangerous situation! Nice work with the words Hank.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16643107370878166382013-09-02T07:16:55.993-07:002013-09-02T07:16:55.993-07:00You really know how to work wonders with a word li...You really know how to work wonders with a word list, Hank.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-81840306875492459462013-09-02T06:52:27.081-07:002013-09-02T06:52:27.081-07:00Yes, what about feathery kind...? Interesting writ...Yes, what about feathery kind...? Interesting write, Hank.humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-46748263589785089222013-09-02T05:21:40.185-07:002013-09-02T05:21:40.185-07:00I sense an imminent oil spill here. Very strong an...I sense an imminent oil spill here. Very strong and honest. I love the metaphors you have used. Thank you for sharing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13049080209056013300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-55333847686544918502013-09-02T02:43:29.494-07:002013-09-02T02:43:29.494-07:00Nobody seems to worry about the feathery creature ...Nobody seems to worry about the feathery creature that got caught in it. Where's your compassion everyone?Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-29790355775025509952013-09-01T17:39:19.085-07:002013-09-01T17:39:19.085-07:00Great imagery and nice tension build-up!Great imagery and nice tension build-up!daphnepurpushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337076348490404223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16446468637283560322013-09-01T10:29:11.563-07:002013-09-01T10:29:11.563-07:00Yes, it does feel like the state of the world toda...Yes, it does feel like the state of the world today. God help us. I love the surprise of where the words took you.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-11154226783425236822013-09-01T10:09:17.149-07:002013-09-01T10:09:17.149-07:00I hope it doesn't take a huge explosion to wak...I hope it doesn't take a huge explosion to wake up the world. Hopefully, we can still avoid it. Good writing Hank.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-4747381583828742052013-09-01T09:26:36.971-07:002013-09-01T09:26:36.971-07:00This could be a metaphor for global situations! We...This could be a metaphor for global situations! Well done, Hank!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-12938674879936706712013-09-01T08:49:42.209-07:002013-09-01T08:49:42.209-07:00Nice use of metaphor here, Hank.
PamelaNice use of metaphor here, Hank.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-45765270891695865272013-09-01T08:48:02.453-07:002013-09-01T08:48:02.453-07:00I like how you have built up tension in this poem ...I like how you have built up tension in this poem Hank! And de do feel relieved at the end!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-70054858643889307232013-09-01T08:26:09.175-07:002013-09-01T08:26:09.175-07:00Good imagery and strong sense of story. Vivid and ...Good imagery and strong sense of story. Vivid and immediate,<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-3822983455154267102013-09-01T08:05:58.833-07:002013-09-01T08:05:58.833-07:00Sometimes it takes an explosion for people to noti...Sometimes it takes an explosion for people to notice...Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-21367973765159976312013-09-01T06:13:43.180-07:002013-09-01T06:13:43.180-07:00someone should have a good sense to act before it ...someone should have a good sense to act before it all explodes...if only we could apply that to so many things in life, you know....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-22310529956274170442013-09-01T06:01:24.870-07:002013-09-01T06:01:24.870-07:00Good sense goes a long way and can avoid explosion...Good sense goes a long way and can avoid explosions any dayPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-26434696921526786282013-09-01T04:47:30.091-07:002013-09-01T04:47:30.091-07:00wonderful!! I hope he gets that taken care of.wonderful!! I hope he gets that taken care of.aspiritofsimplicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14870339828098281415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-26102793570504883482013-09-01T04:12:27.096-07:002013-09-01T04:12:27.096-07:00Well, I hope that this contraption does NOT explod...Well, I hope that this contraption does NOT explode. You worked all the words in well, Hank!!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-59819862302822174472013-09-01T03:27:32.504-07:002013-09-01T03:27:32.504-07:00An oiled and wet machine cannot help but be fuel w...An oiled and wet machine cannot help but be fuel waiting for ignition. Quite a disturbing glimpse of a dramatic situation.Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-6488901774518056542013-09-01T03:18:31.772-07:002013-09-01T03:18:31.772-07:00Oh my, very tense. :)Oh my, very tense. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com