tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post4542881170405718101..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Unruly Assemblykaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-33654093313932836342011-12-03T20:32:50.147-08:002011-12-03T20:32:50.147-08:00Very powerful poem. I like the way you helped ill...Very powerful poem. I like the way you helped illustrate the way many world events are interconnected.Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-41938973059672812342011-12-03T17:48:06.630-08:002011-12-03T17:48:06.630-08:00Beachanny Ma'am,
How nice of you to take the t...Beachanny Ma'am,<br />How nice of you to take the trouble for a serious view of the relationship to the d'Verse prompt. You're absolutely right!<br />It was written specifically for 3WW. I later linked it to d'Verse for want of a posting immediately at hand. I didn't make any changes that was why. Thanks for the tip!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-78741196269320401112011-12-03T14:54:40.645-08:002011-12-03T14:54:40.645-08:00This is great Hank, wonderful word content and as ...This is great Hank, wonderful word content and as always a pleasure to read.<br /><br />Yvonne.RHYTHM AND RHYMEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11386975261804630799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-15421587341423385282011-12-03T14:37:46.687-08:002011-12-03T14:37:46.687-08:00While the rationale of the Real is litanized here,...While the rationale of the Real is litanized here, there doesn't seem to be much in the way of metaphor, symbolism or allegory. This seems like a protesting protest poem which could certainly could be read satirically which I assume is how you meant it. Certainly as such it is quite fine..not quite suited to the article.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-49191214517683788552011-12-03T07:09:25.987-08:002011-12-03T07:09:25.987-08:00this is again a wonderful observation of what kind...this is again a wonderful observation of what kind of world we live in. as how everyone said, strong voice in every line...<br /><br />love it Pareng Hank!<br /><br />JJRod'zJJ Roa Rodriguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501127870785148555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-34460726217711895482011-12-03T05:29:03.125-08:002011-12-03T05:29:03.125-08:00We never know what is around the corner in the lif...We never know what is around the corner in the life of the world, do we, Hank? Who could have predicted some of the things you wrote about in this poem? And who can predict tomorrow? A powerful write.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-2543721391998465112011-12-03T02:04:01.037-08:002011-12-03T02:04:01.037-08:00Your poem flows, easily, smoothly, yet heavy with ...Your poem flows, easily, smoothly, yet heavy with meaning and power.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02399300464457820101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-40273907351681922232011-12-03T01:20:54.378-08:002011-12-03T01:20:54.378-08:00..Reeked of sub human tendencies.. strong voice in.....Reeked of sub human tendencies.. strong voice in this hank.. sometimes i'm wondering where this is all going....Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-73678556927281016592011-12-02T21:13:34.649-08:002011-12-02T21:13:34.649-08:00This was really good, definitely a vocabulary aval...This was really good, definitely a vocabulary avalanche.Sub Radar (Mike)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15558160466204000617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-74724521107198036372011-12-02T20:54:28.917-08:002011-12-02T20:54:28.917-08:00very nice...strong voice hank...i like...yes they ...very nice...strong voice hank...i like...yes they are waiting int he wings...they took our money and will once more if we let them...crazy world in which we live...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-47230038029017604362011-12-02T20:21:10.635-08:002011-12-02T20:21:10.635-08:00Hey, life is a tea party.
Great use of the words....Hey, life is a tea party.<br /><br />Great use of the words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-38343146729281091602011-12-02T19:55:38.018-08:002011-12-02T19:55:38.018-08:00Yes they truly just spin some yarn and expect the ...Yes they truly just spin some yarn and expect the wool to stay over everyone's eyes and for many it does. Sad state of affairs.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-57250391401723742372011-12-02T19:51:04.536-08:002011-12-02T19:51:04.536-08:00An unruly assembly, a murdered despot and occupy m...An unruly assembly, a murdered despot and occupy movement...we live in exciting times, do we ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com