tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post4115203158777014776..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: a vacation in the wilderness kaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-17786368344583076962017-07-19T08:20:55.948-07:002017-07-19T08:20:55.948-07:00This is the second poem I've read this morning...This is the second poem I've read this morning that has a reference to a monk with a dirty mind. What is with monks these days???!!!<br /><br /><a href="https://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2017/07/19/when-i-was-a-girl/" rel="nofollow"><b>My Whirligig poem</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-1435482812835251892017-07-17T09:21:50.938-07:002017-07-17T09:21:50.938-07:00The second to last stanza really jumps out and see...The second to last stanza really jumps out and seems as though it could stand alone.colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16669375650785054059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-4385885826658938772017-07-17T04:46:43.252-07:002017-07-17T04:46:43.252-07:00This is fantastic!! This is fantastic!! Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-33644658100149551722017-07-17T02:46:16.705-07:002017-07-17T02:46:16.705-07:00Interesting and intriguing! Nice one Hank.
Click ...Interesting and intriguing! Nice one Hank.<br /><br /><a href="https://keithsramblings.blogspot.co.uk" rel="nofollow">Click to visit Keith's Ramblings</a><br />Keith's Ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-40404071241861189202017-07-16T18:40:31.026-07:002017-07-16T18:40:31.026-07:00Outdoor baths are fantastic and you've conjure...Outdoor baths are fantastic and you've conjured up this scene nicely!!Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16705740852860425572017-07-16T17:23:13.634-07:002017-07-16T17:23:13.634-07:00I love the description of his wife, in the outdoor...I love the description of his wife, in the outdoor bath, half-hidden by bamboo. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-71530924993777200862017-07-16T16:51:03.087-07:002017-07-16T16:51:03.087-07:00Idyllic idling in the woods ... but wait! ... some...Idyllic idling in the woods ... but wait! ... something wicked this way comes ... maybe. An intriguing write!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-39386441296877779272017-07-16T16:04:21.109-07:002017-07-16T16:04:21.109-07:00Love this picture:
"inviting him over to bat...Love this picture:<br /><br />"inviting him over to bathe together<br />against a backdrop of a leafless mango tree"<br /><br />And the ending:<br /><br />"slow response<br />dirty in thoughts, painting a picture of doom"✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-59651894186112373112017-07-16T14:48:27.946-07:002017-07-16T14:48:27.946-07:00Whew!
ZQWhew!<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-69972724874151397992017-07-16T14:15:14.242-07:002017-07-16T14:15:14.242-07:00I think a vacation like this is perfect... Soon we...I think a vacation like this is perfect... Soon we will be out in the greenerybrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-48299773966204528232017-07-16T14:06:32.179-07:002017-07-16T14:06:32.179-07:00Just a little can go a long way, never know what i...Just a little can go a long way, never know what is beneath the surfacePat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-19201350194519348332017-07-16T13:04:21.450-07:002017-07-16T13:04:21.450-07:00I like the way you've interspersed the words g...I like the way you've interspersed the words given through out with an underlying darkness with hints of love.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-32342246168843595102017-07-16T11:01:43.990-07:002017-07-16T11:01:43.990-07:00A most fascinating use of these words spelling a b...A most fascinating use of these words spelling a bit of sensual pleasure with just a twinge of drama bringing to life this bit of adventure in the wilderness.Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-78835984197158427302017-07-16T10:42:50.487-07:002017-07-16T10:42:50.487-07:00interesting poem here Hank, there a sense of troub...interesting poem here Hank, there a sense of trouble even in this lovely paradise.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.com