tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post4083161078691785207..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: A Centokaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-86800019598856039622012-09-30T00:16:41.070-07:002012-09-30T00:16:41.070-07:00You did a fantastic job combining these together a...You did a fantastic job combining these together and in as such, creating something truly your own. Amazing read, thanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-24737644425551380382012-09-28T23:46:12.999-07:002012-09-28T23:46:12.999-07:00Hi it's cento as the plural is centos. There i...Hi it's cento as the plural is centos. There is a word centones that refers to a patchwork of music. And I did come accross a single reference to a book of 19th century poetry titles centon but it and your title are about the only ones!<br />John (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-15700087016110768612012-09-28T22:07:48.021-07:002012-09-28T22:07:48.021-07:00Great......how well you matched both.......was so ...Great......how well you matched both.......was so happy reading it...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-31388909564914796982012-09-28T22:03:42.974-07:002012-09-28T22:03:42.974-07:00Your stanzas and Service's flow so well togeth...Your stanzas and Service's flow so well together, one would think they were always together. You have captured the rhythm and flow. Nice to see a Canadian poet being referenced:)especially by a poet from another country. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-40212472044157739842012-09-28T20:17:56.680-07:002012-09-28T20:17:56.680-07:00SHERRY
Thanks Sherry. I did it differently to focu...SHERRY<br />Thanks Sherry. I did it differently to focus better <br /><br />K <br />I thought it was way off tangent. But Sam approves of it. Relieved!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-69496263537614916662012-09-28T19:50:59.869-07:002012-09-28T19:50:59.869-07:00You approached this in a very original way, and it...You approached this in a very original way, and it works really well! Thanks, Hank. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-77557393666504552002012-09-28T16:57:46.034-07:002012-09-28T16:57:46.034-07:00What a fine poem you built from these stanzas. Awe...What a fine poem you built from these stanzas. Awesome.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-63544925510911580422012-09-28T15:33:25.895-07:002012-09-28T15:33:25.895-07:00KAY
I owe it all to you Ma'am.Remember you wro...KAY<br />I owe it all to you Ma'am.Remember you wrote about Robert in Feb this year. I took the cue and researched further and wrote one myself. As I had mentioned to others Robert invariably maintained the end rhymes in his poems. It's a joy to read!<br /><br />GREEN<br />Thanks, appreciate it!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-20865024570264804542012-09-28T11:42:53.434-07:002012-09-28T11:42:53.434-07:00I loved this piece ... quite good indeed !!!I loved this piece ... quite good indeed !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-46102722482464088702012-09-28T10:55:19.936-07:002012-09-28T10:55:19.936-07:00One of my all-time favorite poets, of course, Hank...One of my all-time favorite poets, of course, Hank.<br />I love what you've done here.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-77730525349820021492012-09-28T10:17:17.767-07:002012-09-28T10:17:17.767-07:00HEAVEN
Thank you Grace! I managed to stay focused ...HEAVEN<br />Thank you Grace! I managed to stay focused concentrating just on one.<br /><br />PAT<br />Was lost for some while<br />Managed to scramble back<br />Now I can afford to smile<br />And that's a fact!<br /><br />MYRNA<br />Why,thank you Ma'am! You really think so! I'm glad!<br /><br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-61946329653039501812012-09-28T10:07:11.981-07:002012-09-28T10:07:11.981-07:00SAM
Why, thank you Sam! You're not serious are...SAM<br />Why, thank you Sam! You're not serious are you! I did it this way as I'm not familiar with poets of recent times. So the easy way out is to just pick stanzas from one (as I did) or from a few. At least I'm more focused and it makes it easier to organize them. An eminent poet as you saying you learnt something here, gosh! I feel so elated. Made my day Sam. Thank you Sir!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16027176332976355742012-09-28T08:14:21.131-07:002012-09-28T08:14:21.131-07:00Hank, what a great job you did with this. I like ...Hank, what a great job you did with this. I like the feeling I get from it. And I think the stanzas you wrote are as beautiful as those of your source. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-43280910747980375712012-09-28T06:34:45.478-07:002012-09-28T06:34:45.478-07:00The rhyme was grand
And yeah on should sing it lou...The rhyme was grand<br />And yeah on should sing it loud in their land<br />No matter what comes due<br />Just go ahead on cuePat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-81661360241423081692012-09-28T05:37:44.861-07:002012-09-28T05:37:44.861-07:00Thanks for introducing me to his work Hank ~ Nice ...Thanks for introducing me to his work Hank ~ Nice weaving of your lines with his work ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-14769071841166315682012-09-28T04:21:08.868-07:002012-09-28T04:21:08.868-07:00I love Robert Service, and this variation on the c...I love Robert Service, and this variation on the cento - alternating his stanzas, taken from different poems with yours - is unique. I'm fascinated by the possibilities of how the cento author might be able to unify work by a single author this way, as a sort of commentary on the lifework... I may try it out. See, I learned something new here! Excellent!Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-56472264046009498472012-09-28T03:55:05.662-07:002012-09-28T03:55:05.662-07:00BRIAN
It's true. His poem is 'reader frien...BRIAN<br />It's true. His poem is 'reader friendly'. That fascinates me!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-63720059647856665042012-09-28T03:41:37.162-07:002012-09-28T03:41:37.162-07:00CLAUDIA
Poor materially but rich in happiness.Yes,...CLAUDIA<br />Poor materially but rich in happiness.Yes, once happy, assets can slowly build up<br /><br />BREN<br />Face the world with confidence. It's vital to be noticed<br /><br />DAVE<br />Now that you've said it, cut and paste can invite copyright concerns. I dread to think when we're trying our hand at participating in a community effort but may run foul of the law<br /><br />Hank<br />kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-43838587898867922022012-09-28T03:34:35.673-07:002012-09-28T03:34:35.673-07:00nice...i really appreciate the introduction to his...nice...i really appreciate the introduction to his work hank...i am enchanted by his end rhyme as well..but also the message within....it is very uplifting...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-7801092671082419652012-09-28T03:16:53.690-07:002012-09-28T03:16:53.690-07:00Well done, you've made a fine poem from your c...Well done, you've made a fine poem from your cutting and pasting.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-45795583029707258682012-09-28T02:57:52.481-07:002012-09-28T02:57:52.481-07:00Wow Hank... what a great weave. Your Autumn sounds...Wow Hank... what a great weave. Your Autumn sounds sad and yet, it isn't at all. <br />To feel alive and not have to hide our faces is everything.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-75281346043237523472012-09-28T02:50:53.363-07:002012-09-28T02:50:53.363-07:00nice...doesn't matter if poor to make the song...nice...doesn't matter if poor to make the song divine..i like..and i'm all up for singing all day...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com