tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post3817556649541955461..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: corrupt minds with ideas of decadencekaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-53593488201524778352016-10-13T13:48:42.287-07:002016-10-13T13:48:42.287-07:00Loved your choice of words in the use of the cue w...Loved your choice of words in the use of the cue words. Great poem.Helene Vaillanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15366365771039320483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-35701460495021491132016-10-13T11:44:27.577-07:002016-10-13T11:44:27.577-07:00you have worked that list of words exceptionally. ...you have worked that list of words exceptionally. this poem gives one lots to think about.Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-14863676543219397672016-10-12T19:06:24.992-07:002016-10-12T19:06:24.992-07:00Nice Hank, philosophical? It is all cleverly put t...Nice Hank, philosophical? It is all cleverly put together, but my favorite idea is that of "the frailty of reliance."<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-13025314085175757862016-10-12T04:54:10.418-07:002016-10-12T04:54:10.418-07:00Each have their own way of looking, giving some an...Each have their own way of looking, giving some an ugly booking.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-68767528991000830142016-10-11T21:12:52.002-07:002016-10-11T21:12:52.002-07:00Cleverly done, as always.Cleverly done, as always.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-84315320369950451322016-10-11T18:59:41.255-07:002016-10-11T18:59:41.255-07:00I'm with Kerry and Bjorn, I still don't un...I'm with Kerry and Bjorn, I still don't understand why cygnets are considered ugly. Then again, there is so much most of us can understand about the way others view the world. So strange that we look at the same things, and rarely see the same... or see at all. Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-67605953938465016962016-10-11T13:10:37.429-07:002016-10-11T13:10:37.429-07:00A poen of excellence Hank. The given words cleverl...A poen of excellence Hank. The given words cleverly interwoven. <br />Yvonne.nashvillecats2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02326956741209246895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-28643540223032641672016-10-11T12:47:04.708-07:002016-10-11T12:47:04.708-07:00Love the cygnets... and yes they are far from ugly...Love the cygnets... and yes they are far from ugly.. just like Kerry said.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-48364140142978777832016-10-11T09:56:27.765-07:002016-10-11T09:56:27.765-07:00I always wondered why cygnets were considered ugly...I always wondered why cygnets were considered ugly ducklings.<br />Thanks for sharing, Hank.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-88235622806413000972016-10-11T07:34:27.473-07:002016-10-11T07:34:27.473-07:00Amazing use of the given words -- lovely in vocabu...Amazing use of the given words -- lovely in vocabulary & subject -- of course, also sad & a bit painful. Alas, that is poetry -- beautifully wrought. Thanks for sharing. Stacie Eirichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13889951415294858821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-81984174759118558482016-10-11T07:23:08.207-07:002016-10-11T07:23:08.207-07:00That bandaged ego, is no fun, I feel the pain of...That bandaged ego, is no fun, I feel the pain of your poem's persona<br /><br />Have a blessed day<br /><br />Much love... Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-83253403891188455022016-10-11T03:02:56.614-07:002016-10-11T03:02:56.614-07:00Cloudia captured the exact lines I was going to hi...Cloudia captured the exact lines I was going to highlight Hank, gorgeous. <br /><br />mlmAmberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16157593291278155756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-79589227807651092022016-10-10T22:25:29.608-07:002016-10-10T22:25:29.608-07:00I love the cygnet. This poem makes me think of my ...I love the cygnet. This poem makes me think of my young self, so eager to have someone accept her that she put herself into bad circumstances. People said she was "bad," but she wasn't really. She was just lost.<br /><br />Cie from poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.comOrnery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-17139269439599893242016-10-10T16:11:42.168-07:002016-10-10T16:11:42.168-07:00"adrift in inexplicable circumstances
bandage..."adrift in inexplicable circumstances<br />bandaged ego had fallen from grace<br />corrupt minds with ideas of decadence<br />if only had care taken to get some space" or grace?<br /><br /><br />Your usual worthy workCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.com