tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post3652506109132033461..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Way of the Underworldkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-38181875172301324682014-03-24T20:45:22.688-07:002014-03-24T20:45:22.688-07:00Movin' on up, and movin' on out! Love thi...Movin' on up, and movin' on out! Love this, Hank.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-46559325433756529512014-03-24T19:32:48.798-07:002014-03-24T19:32:48.798-07:00Nice use of words, Hank! Sharp poem!Nice use of words, Hank! Sharp poem!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-43812459969033014142014-03-24T16:00:38.724-07:002014-03-24T16:00:38.724-07:00those last two lines are so hopeless and sad!those last two lines are so hopeless and sad!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-87873791288088701482014-03-24T14:57:44.963-07:002014-03-24T14:57:44.963-07:00Unfortunately, Hank, your words ring much too true...Unfortunately, Hank, your words ring much too true here. Scary happenings like this all over the world. Good write.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-53633618126572945222014-03-24T13:06:18.505-07:002014-03-24T13:06:18.505-07:00The underworld scars me. Here, regularly, someone ...The underworld scars me. Here, regularly, someone will get killed by some local mafia. Just scary. And they definitely have their own rules.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-17402754497668212442014-03-24T11:41:09.036-07:002014-03-24T11:41:09.036-07:00
being the lesser being is always a risk....very w...<br />being the lesser being is always a risk....very well said Hank...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-66232589146323853492014-03-24T06:07:24.080-07:002014-03-24T06:07:24.080-07:00I like the sonnet-like form of this poem, which po...I like the sonnet-like form of this poem, which points to a social ill prevalent in many societies.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-22209046867798034662014-03-24T04:31:08.569-07:002014-03-24T04:31:08.569-07:00That underworld is very easy to fall into..and as ...That underworld is very easy to fall into..and as you infer..harder to get out of..nicely inked!Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-30713454317356879682014-03-23T21:35:17.025-07:002014-03-23T21:35:17.025-07:00they def. have their own rules... and it's fri...they def. have their own rules... and it's frightening..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-69558241315895960002014-03-23T18:19:50.648-07:002014-03-23T18:19:50.648-07:00People fall for the allure only to end up hurt or ...People fall for the allure only to end up hurt or worseHoly Ghost Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16107809586103198047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-77974208203335531432014-03-23T17:22:26.120-07:002014-03-23T17:22:26.120-07:00The underworld scares me, Hank. Your poem lets me...The underworld scares me, Hank. Your poem lets me know just why. Any wise person should steer clear.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-51367700288230017412014-03-23T16:29:43.881-07:002014-03-23T16:29:43.881-07:00Clearly once you're in, you are there for the ...Clearly once you're in, you are there for the rest of you life...which may be quite short.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-67779604186757628752014-03-23T15:55:08.448-07:002014-03-23T15:55:08.448-07:00Thanks Pat. Very timely. Caught me by surprise eve...Thanks Pat. Very timely. Caught me by surprise even this year, March 9th to be specific! <br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-10666641142228152152014-03-23T14:43:40.429-07:002014-03-23T14:43:40.429-07:00Scary stuff for a rural hick like me! Nicely done,...Scary stuff for a rural hick like me! Nicely done, Hank!Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-61548080481454132052014-03-23T11:57:11.909-07:002014-03-23T11:57:11.909-07:00I can't understand the ways of the underworld ...I can't understand the ways of the underworld but they do exist in abhorrence ~<br /><br />Happy Sunday Hank ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-87539430374778916102014-03-23T11:52:30.155-07:002014-03-23T11:52:30.155-07:00A glimpse into the underworld. A precarious existe...A glimpse into the underworld. A precarious existence, theirs. Good one, Hank!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-56443265617131297092014-03-23T10:51:00.384-07:002014-03-23T10:51:00.384-07:00There! That was a fine piece!
ZQThere! That was a fine piece!<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-24684437751351657162014-03-23T10:38:49.226-07:002014-03-23T10:38:49.226-07:00Very interesting Hank.
Yvonne.Very interesting Hank.<br />Yvonne.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-31723540397490036512014-03-23T09:53:58.724-07:002014-03-23T09:53:58.724-07:00interesting.. the ending part was a surprise.interesting.. the ending part was a surprise.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-75872691433772146622014-03-23T09:02:26.037-07:002014-03-23T09:02:26.037-07:00I believe I have met your quartet of troublemakers...I believe I have met your quartet of troublemakers several times during my life (although I wish I hadn't).<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2014/03/23/warning/" rel="nofollow"><b>Raven Quartet</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-1087217877294696042014-03-23T08:29:29.860-07:002014-03-23T08:29:29.860-07:00yikes....def made me think of gang activity which ...yikes....def made me think of gang activity which we are seeing more and more of...the lower guards come and go., the survivors moving up the ranks...its a scary way to find belonging...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-4048423078734281552014-03-23T07:55:40.256-07:002014-03-23T07:55:40.256-07:00My mind's eye captured such much going on betw...My mind's eye captured such much going on between your lines as well, and by linking these words you aced this collection and created a dazzling, ink printt! 21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-49398626411750519902014-03-23T07:34:13.120-07:002014-03-23T07:34:13.120-07:00Yeah the low ones on the totem pole are always the...Yeah the low ones on the totem pole are always the first to go, expendable is what they are made to be.<br /><br />Oh and fyi if you remember what happened last year on the 24th, it starts again tomorrow, just so you know as many a #1 may need to show.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com