tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post3144849686138305630..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Last Summerkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-83151624734502557222011-08-17T20:58:31.680-07:002011-08-17T20:58:31.680-07:00Oh yes... the sun does indeed make its way beyond ...Oh yes... the sun does indeed make its way beyond all cloud and grey... and so do hope and determination!! <br /><br />A lovely and inspiring poem, my friend...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-36733995453552742922011-08-17T19:40:23.455-07:002011-08-17T19:40:23.455-07:00Centered yet branching well and strong. Nicely sh...Centered yet branching well and strong. Nicely shared.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-36077283169037789582011-08-17T11:19:25.382-07:002011-08-17T11:19:25.382-07:00This reminds me of how many oaks in Galveston were...This reminds me of how many oaks in Galveston were destroyed by Ike's storm surge.<br /><br />Wonderful how you wove all the haikus together seamlessly, and with such beautiful imagery.Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-88311523608847194892011-08-17T05:03:48.711-07:002011-08-17T05:03:48.711-07:00Loved the way you ended it...
another wonderful pi...Loved the way you ended it...<br />another wonderful piece of writing :)Madhulikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03117132402215436632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-399424421960775602011-08-17T04:20:14.891-07:002011-08-17T04:20:14.891-07:00Lovely set of haiku with nature interplaying in th...Lovely set of haiku with nature interplaying in the lines...<br /><br />Enjoyed it much ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-5740412539415714922011-08-17T03:49:23.381-07:002011-08-17T03:49:23.381-07:00Very well done. The effect was cumulative - as it ...Very well done. The effect was cumulative - as it should have been. I enjoyed the read very much indeed.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-26503481762708272582011-08-17T03:09:25.808-07:002011-08-17T03:09:25.808-07:00Wonderful verse, we have not had much of a summer ...Wonderful verse, we have not had much of a summer just the odd nice day, The only really hot weather I encountered this year was when I was in the US. Today is very Autumnal.<br /><br />Have a wonderful day.<br />Yvonne.RHYTHM AND RHYMEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11386975261804630799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-36531937495850872412011-08-17T01:14:13.215-07:002011-08-17T01:14:13.215-07:00description of weather is beautiful.
As always it...description of weather is beautiful. <br />As always it was a nice read !!!Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-41860619011392948302011-08-17T00:30:59.439-07:002011-08-17T00:30:59.439-07:00i like that you've made this a series of haiku...i like that you've made this a series of haikus...fits the changing weather and makes for a great flow hankClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-3447012578316371292011-08-16T21:53:56.392-07:002011-08-16T21:53:56.392-07:00Trees fascinate me. I like that oak tree took ever...Trees fascinate me. I like that oak tree took everything in stride :)TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-91156941396196981272011-08-16T20:14:12.289-07:002011-08-16T20:14:12.289-07:00Very well done, hot is this one. Need to find some...Very well done, hot is this one. Need to find some shade to beat the heat or some water to cool my feet.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-35102913950268619832011-08-16T20:00:32.419-07:002011-08-16T20:00:32.419-07:00..these are sets of delightful Haikus.. 'tis a.....these are sets of delightful Haikus.. 'tis always a pleasure to read your Haikus my friend.. you nailed me at the 2nd and 4th one.. adorable!(:kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08116213800655914273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-76752279267585057162011-08-16T19:36:02.017-07:002011-08-16T19:36:02.017-07:00Lovely write, Hank. :)Lovely write, Hank. :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-44053662654170347802011-08-16T19:35:53.259-07:002011-08-16T19:35:53.259-07:00i really like the inclusion of the tree there in t...i really like the inclusion of the tree there in the middle...it centers the haikus well...well done...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16123379457711877422011-08-16T19:33:56.341-07:002011-08-16T19:33:56.341-07:00This feels strong and direct like the sun. I like...This feels strong and direct like the sun. I like it!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-43785312487613490712011-08-16T19:26:53.794-07:002011-08-16T19:26:53.794-07:00This is the first time I've read your poem.Nic...This is the first time I've read your poem.Nice flow and a good read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-65599975539744821662011-08-16T18:32:20.152-07:002011-08-16T18:32:20.152-07:00All haiku and I believe one senryu (but I'll l...All haiku and I believe one senryu (but I'll leave that for Lady Nyo). I love haiku sets and have written a number of them. I wish cold winds and rain would make an appearance around here. I'd take steam at this point and that is all it would be. Losing trees (old and sturdy ones) and everything ele is gone. Love that nature up; it needs it! G.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.com