tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post3111592150940709790..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Autumn Chillskaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-8207181193643306072012-09-10T16:49:32.642-07:002012-09-10T16:49:32.642-07:00Wonderful, kiddo. You mastered the form very well....Wonderful, kiddo. You mastered the form very well.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-53055517428606865952012-09-09T20:53:14.262-07:002012-09-09T20:53:14.262-07:00A new form for me as well..I like it!A new form for me as well..I like it!Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-22377242930230818602012-09-09T18:42:27.077-07:002012-09-09T18:42:27.077-07:00Very clever, sir. I like the form,and the sentimen...Very clever, sir. I like the form,and the sentiment (I sure hope life is fair; sometimes I wonder). But especially I like the honesty behind "some trepidation." Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-21792430339637666942012-09-09T16:43:31.394-07:002012-09-09T16:43:31.394-07:00Hank,
I love your autumnal words, which have been...Hank,<br /><br />I love your autumnal words, which have been expertly illustrated in this very clever form.<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-91760053737132772842012-09-09T13:17:23.163-07:002012-09-09T13:17:23.163-07:00Lovely form where form follows function here. I ke...Lovely form where form follows function here. I kept thinking as I re-read it how many different autumn images it looked like - stacks of leaves, pylons on a football field, cheerleader megaphones, bonfires, etc. and loved the play on words as well!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-68131017233342270512012-09-09T12:30:31.979-07:002012-09-09T12:30:31.979-07:00Exquisite~Exquisite~Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-54457859696551844132012-09-09T10:04:28.409-07:002012-09-09T10:04:28.409-07:00You used that form so well plus gave it a nice fal...You used that form so well plus gave it a nice fall flavor!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-65659585011704068502012-09-09T10:00:50.121-07:002012-09-09T10:00:50.121-07:00This is so cool. You've inspired me to try th...This is so cool. You've inspired me to try the form myself. I enjoyed how it felt to read it... it has a beat that I like.Serenahttp://www.serenahelriot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-6527813696036818832012-09-09T05:58:57.734-07:002012-09-09T05:58:57.734-07:00I love autumn for all of its colours and smells, b...I love autumn for all of its colours and smells, but don't want the cold that follows it. <br />Nice writing Hank!Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-74978805305332123362012-09-09T05:55:30.136-07:002012-09-09T05:55:30.136-07:00Though it doesn't seem
Like more than a pipe d...Though it doesn't seem<br />Like more than a pipe dream<br />Life can surely be fair<br />Even if it is kind of rarePat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-90468678245741142572012-09-09T05:55:15.927-07:002012-09-09T05:55:15.927-07:00Not really fair but I like autumn's magical ab...Not really fair but I like autumn's magical abundance ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-74292844525417675872012-09-09T04:48:34.586-07:002012-09-09T04:48:34.586-07:00Life is fair? I have serious doubts!Life is fair? I have serious doubts!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-75773677246230860282012-09-09T04:47:00.458-07:002012-09-09T04:47:00.458-07:00Enjoyed your poem, Hank! I do hope 'life is ...Enjoyed your poem, Hank! I do hope 'life is fair' when it comes to our football season this year, which begins today. I will be one of those 'cheering fans' of whom you speak!! Fun to see my photo at your site. Smiles.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-18581886876438203092012-09-09T04:17:39.228-07:002012-09-09T04:17:39.228-07:00Balance is nice in seasons and poetry. Very nice, ...Balance is nice in seasons and poetry. Very nice, Hank!Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/09/08/a-sudden-fall-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-3081714414183281342012-09-09T03:06:39.780-07:002012-09-09T03:06:39.780-07:00Great verse this - and a great new (to me)form to ...Great verse this - and a great new (to me)form to boot. thanks for both. A fine start to a new day's visiting!Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-15044523644351117842012-09-09T03:00:50.963-07:002012-09-09T03:00:50.963-07:00Useful to explore how form and subject affect each...Useful to explore how form and subject affect each otherJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-44921716812890634682012-09-09T00:42:30.249-07:002012-09-09T00:42:30.249-07:00Loved the way you wrote this one !!!Loved the way you wrote this one !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-2923014708748710862012-09-08T23:33:51.012-07:002012-09-08T23:33:51.012-07:00 Tetractys, a new poetic form to me ... I like it!... Tetractys, a new poetic form to me ... I like it!<br /><br />Like your autumnal poem too :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-70925256537591116222012-09-08T21:54:00.275-07:002012-09-08T21:54:00.275-07:00Life is fair!!!Life is fair!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-1652903444980016572012-09-08T21:41:21.111-07:002012-09-08T21:41:21.111-07:00Lively piece. The form is really interesting too!
...Lively piece. The form is really interesting too!<br />Thanks for the visit and comment.Laura Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-56683909049768160172012-09-08T20:53:05.125-07:002012-09-08T20:53:05.125-07:00I hope it is! Always I hope for fair.I hope it is! Always I hope for fair.Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-5557109596376937922012-09-08T19:31:34.343-07:002012-09-08T19:31:34.343-07:00as much as we think it not at times i would say it...as much as we think it not at times i would say it ends pretty well in balance...cool form as well hank...what is to come will whether we worry about it or not...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com