tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post3015109260793174196..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: The wild truthkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-14272080533069812902013-05-23T16:41:22.400-07:002013-05-23T16:41:22.400-07:00hank,
I love your rhyme and stanza selections. I ...hank, <br />I love your rhyme and stanza selections. I really like the introspection that takes place throughout the piece. This is a fabulous contribution to Verse First!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-49319085769315579582013-05-23T06:41:11.001-07:002013-05-23T06:41:11.001-07:00Hank,
Even the best of us might have an internal ...Hank,<br /><br />Even the best of us might have an internal bugbear to spit out at some point...Trying to carry a heavy weight can make for a tired life. The truth helps to make the load more bearable, one hopes:)<br /><br />Eileen:)Eileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-43492486063179302262013-05-23T06:26:03.604-07:002013-05-23T06:26:03.604-07:00/Time to make amends, hold it by the horns/ I like.../Time to make amends, hold it by the horns/ I like this line, it is the meat of the poem and a great metaphor.parentforward.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02363442700397713616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-1617190245926737132013-05-23T05:12:34.925-07:002013-05-23T05:12:34.925-07:00Give the bear a poke? On you he may choke. haha ye...Give the bear a poke? On you he may choke. haha yeah have to take a look at such truthsPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-12553185035918269312013-05-23T04:53:44.018-07:002013-05-23T04:53:44.018-07:00Sometimes we want answers and sometimes it's b...Sometimes we want answers and sometimes it's best to let the bear rest!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-46421106479132347112013-05-23T01:11:10.661-07:002013-05-23T01:11:10.661-07:00I like your bear and beehive metaphors.I like your bear and beehive metaphors.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-33309022673938590252013-05-23T00:38:34.856-07:002013-05-23T00:38:34.856-07:00That picture is so curious I really like it! This ...That picture is so curious I really like it! This is gorgeous and the truth is wild, life is one helluva a rideAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-22228689816061883342013-05-22T23:44:22.837-07:002013-05-22T23:44:22.837-07:00Very well said! Nothing to lose and the entire thi...Very well said! Nothing to lose and the entire thing read in one piece about the one where nothign is there to lose, absolutely!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-5940231759696271062013-05-22T21:31:12.696-07:002013-05-22T21:31:12.696-07:00Hank, that picture blew me away. Loved your inter...Hank, that picture blew me away. Loved your internal rhyme of poke/provoke, very clever! And yes, poking our perceived truths (not in the eye) is very healthy. Like a reality check.<br /><br />So glad you commented at Sharp Li'l, honey. Peace, Amy<br />PS the comment above me is SPAM!! Don't click the link!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-84449819764975662062013-05-22T20:29:10.248-07:002013-05-22T20:29:10.248-07:00smiles..i like your wild truth hank...i think that...smiles..i like your wild truth hank...i think that sometimes we do have to poke our truths a bit to make sure they are wtill wild and living in us...really cool write man...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-71085499804130444912013-05-22T19:15:38.841-07:002013-05-22T19:15:38.841-07:00Some good advice there - especially never poke a b...Some good advice there - especially never poke a beehive. I take that to heart as I am LIVING in one right now! Great write, kiddo. Great truths.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-66117900741247582572013-05-22T19:14:01.317-07:002013-05-22T19:14:01.317-07:00Hank....I think one reaches a point in life where ...Hank....I think one reaches a point in life where one realizes that it is the best thing to make amends. Not always easy, but important.....not only for the other person, but specifically for oneself. We need to be honest with ourselves and other important people in our lives...now....while we can. Strong poem, Hank.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-31472318940385504772013-05-22T19:11:17.295-07:002013-05-22T19:11:17.295-07:00Conscience will always answer our questions and th...Conscience will always answer our questions and they are all true...nice take...Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com