tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post2739391866350941133..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: A Dinner That Wasn'tkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-39990387924606897352012-08-11T06:37:41.188-07:002012-08-11T06:37:41.188-07:00Sorry I took so long to reply to this. I am workin...Sorry I took so long to reply to this. I am working with Windows while I excel at Apple and figuring this out is difficult. Right clicking is helping the navigating process. =D<br /><br />I love the soft spoken voice of your poem, Hank. It adds to the atmosphere of worry and excuse making. You have generated a strong feeling of angst that goes with the expression of the art. Well done and thank you for sharing. =DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-64596950454396897322012-08-07T21:15:12.504-07:002012-08-07T21:15:12.504-07:00I'm hoping he had good reason for not showing ...I'm hoping he had good reason for not showing up.21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-14102430368922352012012-08-07T03:04:27.353-07:002012-08-07T03:04:27.353-07:00Whata horrible situation, having to make excuses w...Whata horrible situation, having to make excuses whilst privately worrying. Thank goodess the room was dimly lit to hide her embarrassment.Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-61620228676962046632012-08-06T20:27:39.401-07:002012-08-06T20:27:39.401-07:00This is a classic "Shop Around the Corner&quo...This is a classic "Shop Around the Corner" moment, as though she had the book with a red rose in it, waiting for a blind date... yet the poem told much more.<br /><br />He'd damned well better show up, and with the flat tire IN HIS HAND, ha ha, from your new prompt.<br /><br />Finally - there is a bit of syntax mismatching. It's formal until "OK," and some other stuff. If you decide to publish this, Hank, email me a copy and I'll help you edit. That's what friends are for! Peace, AmySharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-89805725685987166912012-08-06T19:47:34.212-07:002012-08-06T19:47:34.212-07:00OH, dear.
Not a good thing.
"/OH, dear.<br /><br />Not a good thing.<br /><br />"/Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-69511245094277520342012-08-06T15:10:06.345-07:002012-08-06T15:10:06.345-07:00Maybe he's the unabomber?Maybe he's the unabomber?Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-59477246101453298072012-08-06T09:09:39.198-07:002012-08-06T09:09:39.198-07:00There are so many scenarios as to why he didn'...There are so many scenarios as to why he didn't make it...I like how you created a mystery each reader tries to solve...Great take on the photo!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-54236860606562807232012-08-06T06:29:55.930-07:002012-08-06T06:29:55.930-07:00Lots of possibilities to imagine...I would hate be...Lots of possibilities to imagine...I would hate being stood up.JANUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06983287092498427967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-64059667034356532772012-08-05T23:41:09.294-07:002012-08-05T23:41:09.294-07:00there was a loud crash
outside the grand entrance
...there was a loud crash<br />outside the grand entrance<br />commotion, distraction<br /><br />fatal date it was...<br /><br />Hah! I see I am one with zongrik!ninotazizhttp://www.poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-71511172331096096462012-08-05T20:17:31.454-07:002012-08-05T20:17:31.454-07:00Could be.
You've captured the worry/anger/em...Could be. <br />You've captured the worry/anger/embarrassment--in a minute you'll have her pull out her Cell phone and call the hospitals or a taxi . . .<br /><br />Very realistic!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-35216486472216905832012-08-05T17:41:16.261-07:002012-08-05T17:41:16.261-07:00HAH! Yes, you have perfectly captured her expressi...HAH! Yes, you have perfectly captured her expression in this piece!Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-24024096970915578752012-08-05T17:05:05.336-07:002012-08-05T17:05:05.336-07:00Good one Hank, yeah, it looks like new sharks are ...Good one Hank, yeah, it looks like new sharks are already circling !Silent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-74896850680157671072012-08-05T15:48:02.136-07:002012-08-05T15:48:02.136-07:00ugh on being stood up...def not a fun feeling..and...ugh on being stood up...def not a fun feeling..and leaves one to wonder what to do...do you wait or do you give up....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-4135339753308458532012-08-05T11:40:35.570-07:002012-08-05T11:40:35.570-07:00Nice perspective Hank ~ Hopefully he shows up soo...Nice perspective Hank ~ Hopefully he shows up soon or it would be embarrassing to explain to the guests ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-15889494505356549672012-08-05T11:00:44.120-07:002012-08-05T11:00:44.120-07:00Yes - very interesting take on the picture! HOpe ...Yes - very interesting take on the picture! HOpe he shows up~! k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-74977970070572532002012-08-05T10:39:31.837-07:002012-08-05T10:39:31.837-07:00Good take on this picture. There are so many possi...Good take on this picture. There are so many possibilities.Sue Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15864986500627496240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-35877161576525992752012-08-05T10:39:04.589-07:002012-08-05T10:39:04.589-07:00Many a thing could have happened indeed, and that ...Many a thing could have happened indeed, and that is when the thoughts run and plant the horrible what if seed.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-38275687647683451692012-08-05T09:58:33.126-07:002012-08-05T09:58:33.126-07:00maybe he got in a car accident?maybe he got in a car accident?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com