tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post2516591481598019939..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: a lonely figure not quite vanquished kaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-76729236334749087432018-02-07T16:25:28.868-08:002018-02-07T16:25:28.868-08:00Let him let fly! Go!Let him let fly! Go!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-40358524947836921692018-02-07T14:15:36.798-08:002018-02-07T14:15:36.798-08:00sought solace outside city limits
accompanied only...sought solace outside city limits<br />accompanied only by a lighted globe<br /><br />hopefully, the globe can light the way...Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-21666349111719028512018-02-07T11:30:38.605-08:002018-02-07T11:30:38.605-08:00I can feel the contemplation, feels like a person ...I can feel the contemplation, feels like a person on the precipice of a life changing event. Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-72356444545921593842018-02-07T11:13:04.617-08:002018-02-07T11:13:04.617-08:00"a lonely figure not quite vanquished
but sub..."a lonely figure not quite vanquished<br />but subdued found contemplating<br />on the beach alone<br /><br />a ritual before dawn freely drawn<br />not confined within glass walls<br /><br />sought solace outside city limits<br />accompanied only by a lighted globe"<br /><br /><br />some nice rhythm; im diggin the stretching O's and Aw's ~ that assonance <br />wishfulpennywellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01515735320175463909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-6702245547511342202018-02-07T10:39:27.580-08:002018-02-07T10:39:27.580-08:00love this, lovely imaginative phrases, and with th...love this, lovely imaginative phrases, and with the photo, the lighted globe becomes the moon -- so I imagined a story as I read the poem, of a wizard casting a spell but his mind wanders at the crucial moment to his love troubles and whoops, his safeguards falter and oops, he captured the blood moon -- a fine pecadillo he's gotten into!MNL (Cactus Haiku)http://cactushaiku.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-3685861620772809102018-02-07T09:37:50.940-08:002018-02-07T09:37:50.940-08:00Deep in thought and not aware of the dangers!Deep in thought and not aware of the dangers!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-28800597716988695722018-02-07T07:31:35.578-08:002018-02-07T07:31:35.578-08:00I think your poem really suits the image and I lov...I think your poem really suits the image and I loved the idea of ghosts with fangs!Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16157593291278155756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-40457745230591927222018-02-07T02:15:19.533-08:002018-02-07T02:15:19.533-08:00used the words so well - nice tempo to it and love...used the words so well - nice tempo to it and love this:~"sneaky<br />malefactor elements who could<br />easily prevaricate to gain access"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-77692417858783933362018-02-07T00:55:29.640-08:002018-02-07T00:55:29.640-08:00jilted lover indeed... a beautiful image..jilted lover indeed... a beautiful image..Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-43468205467750540432018-02-06T23:27:53.266-08:002018-02-06T23:27:53.266-08:00Beautifully descriptive and going beyond mere desc...Beautifully descriptive and going beyond mere description.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-63038729393680869832018-02-06T13:41:03.252-08:002018-02-06T13:41:03.252-08:00Have to watch those dragons, they may bite. But th...Have to watch those dragons, they may bite. But then lovers can burn you too.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-60074815107055678382018-02-06T12:32:19.378-08:002018-02-06T12:32:19.378-08:00Sometimes I think I would love to escape with a ba...Sometimes I think I would love to escape with a ball of fire too.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-2431443227585775992018-02-06T09:35:32.976-08:002018-02-06T09:35:32.976-08:00Love the image, and what your poetry tells us abou...Love the image, and what your poetry tells us about what might've happened.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.com