tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post2497201360396807430..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Rainkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16243536573375270012011-12-19T03:21:21.746-08:002011-12-19T03:21:21.746-08:00wat a beautiful story u said with those words...
...wat a beautiful story u said with those words... <br />very interestingly u started it :)Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-75803635654883404362011-12-18T10:48:14.851-08:002011-12-18T10:48:14.851-08:00Great story woven. Lingering questions afterwards ...Great story woven. Lingering questions afterwards but curiosity defines the world. Loved it.Monikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15844893934428524824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-9348836404594846202011-12-18T10:30:50.146-08:002011-12-18T10:30:50.146-08:00I like all the relationships and intricacy here at...I like all the relationships and intricacy here at the end, contrasting with the lonely figure at the beginning. Great informal feel, too, Hank, as if we're watching it all happen.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-13834950366471169282011-12-18T09:39:30.699-08:002011-12-18T09:39:30.699-08:00two such nice people, the one who wants to give he...two such nice people, the one who wants to give her the ride, and she not wanting to get the car wetAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16878282375127861092011-12-18T08:37:28.108-08:002011-12-18T08:37:28.108-08:00Very well penned Hank.
Yvonne.Very well penned Hank.<br /><br />Yvonne.RHYTHM AND RHYMEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11386975261804630799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-82105162323625148182011-12-18T06:35:02.138-08:002011-12-18T06:35:02.138-08:00I like that this piece poses so many intriguing qu...I like that this piece poses so many intriguing questions and paints such a vibrant tale... lovely write!Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-87007928522998963152011-12-18T05:29:02.839-08:002011-12-18T05:29:02.839-08:00A day you remember caught in the storyA day you remember caught in the storyJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-1107516367018061742011-12-18T02:26:16.743-08:002011-12-18T02:26:16.743-08:00Well written I feel, and funny too.Well written I feel, and funny too.Francishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01504049722112423904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-36214399976557838922011-12-18T01:16:05.997-08:002011-12-18T01:16:05.997-08:00A touch or two of most things in this, including h...A touch or two of most things in this, including humour. A real tour de force. Well done.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-82898950720023532752011-12-18T00:50:35.490-08:002011-12-18T00:50:35.490-08:00an interesting take on it hank..the hasty decision...an interesting take on it hank..the hasty decisions..the rain..the rescue..is it a rescue..? sometimes it's better to stay out in the rain..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-36801476012383780402011-12-17T21:38:18.964-08:002011-12-17T21:38:18.964-08:00I like it Hank. Hasty decisions may lead us astr...I like it Hank. Hasty decisions may lead us astray. I am glad he can help her.<br />Happy weekend ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-11114252199196071532011-12-17T21:25:02.479-08:002011-12-17T21:25:02.479-08:00Interesting story. So much one could read between ...Interesting story. So much one could read between the line I assumeSheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-38496211949918022872011-12-17T20:13:30.975-08:002011-12-17T20:13:30.975-08:00this is like a magpie tale.
very haunting and deep...this is like a magpie tale.<br />very haunting and deep story.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-51677246936492243412011-12-17T19:57:57.376-08:002011-12-17T19:57:57.376-08:00Hank, you know me. I don't trust the guy at a...Hank, you know me. I don't trust the guy at all. If I were the girl, I would have run home. Good writing, and it leaves lingering questions, which intrigues the reader even more! Amy<br /><br />And now for snarky politics!<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/anthemforanewparty/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-91592588493076774802011-12-17T19:53:54.649-08:002011-12-17T19:53:54.649-08:00I think that there is a greater story beneath. Ye...I think that there is a greater story beneath. Yes, sometimes people could have waited, probably should have waited. And I do wonder sometimes why everyone is in such a hurry. Strong write, Hank.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-37625560886533821772011-12-17T19:48:45.134-08:002011-12-17T19:48:45.134-08:00intersting scene hank...there seems to be an under...intersting scene hank...there seems to be an undertone of something else here as well...hasty decisions, emotional decisions def not always the best...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-4528024471462129042011-12-17T19:41:34.523-08:002011-12-17T19:41:34.523-08:00Well if it's a warm rain not so bad
Who cares ...Well if it's a warm rain not so bad<br />Who cares if the car gets wet a tad<br />And nice with the otw explanation too<br />You might confuse some with just the acronym, sad but true..hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com