tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post21122520825939772..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Swept off the ground shockedkaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-52814623666936051532016-12-07T16:40:40.251-08:002016-12-07T16:40:40.251-08:00On my first kiss i felt that my tongue stayed hang...On my first kiss i felt that my tongue stayed hanging out after the kiss. I remember wondering what all the fus was about, lol! A nice write:)Pat Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802650408750617363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-9554350077921233662016-12-07T16:36:36.728-08:002016-12-07T16:36:36.728-08:00Lol! Young minds, how they work. That's funny....Lol! Young minds, how they work. That's funny. But I just know it wasn't then:)Pat Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802650408750617363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-40296305314847934202016-12-05T12:01:37.023-08:002016-12-05T12:01:37.023-08:00How the first kiss and relationship can feel uncha...How the first kiss and relationship can feel uncharitable when dumped for the first time.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-32302483287179816512016-12-05T11:50:50.546-08:002016-12-05T11:50:50.546-08:00This is a lovely poem. Made me smile :)This is a lovely poem. Made me smile :)Purba chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10726789340791239305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-65668627969208175702016-12-05T09:15:15.638-08:002016-12-05T09:15:15.638-08:00You brought back memories of my first kiss - so aw...You brought back memories of my first kiss - so awkward it really was uncharitable.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-72401069882516414202016-12-05T06:49:19.528-08:002016-12-05T06:49:19.528-08:00Such a delightful read ❤️Such a delightful read ❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-85432851161487351042016-12-04T22:35:54.447-08:002016-12-04T22:35:54.447-08:00I took the 'uncharitable' to mean that it ...I took the 'uncharitable' to mean that it was not an act of pity but desire.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-75757527119671149182016-12-04T18:28:36.828-08:002016-12-04T18:28:36.828-08:00I think mine was uncharitable as well--Loved this ...I think mine was uncharitable as well--Loved this Hank!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-85452650583242265882016-12-04T16:25:26.984-08:002016-12-04T16:25:26.984-08:00This delightful and brought a smile. Thanks Hank....This delightful and brought a smile. Thanks Hank. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-12582927532446160422016-12-04T15:54:53.772-08:002016-12-04T15:54:53.772-08:00Oh yes! Malana. What a teacherOh yes! Malana. What a teacherAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16071813305369745012016-12-04T14:29:07.647-08:002016-12-04T14:29:07.647-08:00OK I LOVE you. :)OK I LOVE you. :)ZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-46717166984071214862016-12-04T14:27:24.760-08:002016-12-04T14:27:24.760-08:00I liked the hug, but I don't know about the &q...I liked the hug, but I don't know about the "uncharitable" kiss. I think in the realm of the senses, being startled is mighty scary.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-57695800690677761622016-12-04T13:32:16.882-08:002016-12-04T13:32:16.882-08:00Ha...sometimes 'uncharitable' is the way i...Ha...sometimes 'uncharitable' is the way it was the very first time!! Hopefully, in time it is better.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-32099487629089731942016-12-04T12:20:18.760-08:002016-12-04T12:20:18.760-08:00Swept up and hopefully still kissing awaySwept up and hopefully still kissing awayPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-68559428164667121102016-12-04T10:37:29.350-08:002016-12-04T10:37:29.350-08:00Ha, you reminded me of my first kiss - at the pinn...Ha, you reminded me of my first kiss - at the pinnacle moment my mom turned on the porch light and opened the door and we both froze, thinking we had been struck by lightning. I dont think any other kiss ever matched it. LOL.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-3779536014604221832016-12-04T10:04:58.928-08:002016-12-04T10:04:58.928-08:00I feel the heat!I feel the heat!Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-42414461420830554432016-12-04T08:50:27.462-08:002016-12-04T08:50:27.462-08:00'Uncharitable' pricks...'Uncharitable' pricks...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-42207004524629832122016-12-04T08:49:16.093-08:002016-12-04T08:49:16.093-08:00The first kiss... I still remember the tingle... w...The first kiss... I still remember the tingle... when I close my eyes I can feel the warmth of her lips.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-13590657679181328222016-12-04T07:32:58.728-08:002016-12-04T07:32:58.728-08:00uncharitable - is the kiss unwanted? I love the b...uncharitable - is the kiss unwanted? I love the bird picture.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-81434550653615578722016-12-04T06:44:09.979-08:002016-12-04T06:44:09.979-08:00The uncharitable part seemed like a twist..The uncharitable part seemed like a twist..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-16374776422076296332016-12-04T06:27:13.062-08:002016-12-04T06:27:13.062-08:00I remember the shock. I was 13, and my father inte...I remember the shock. I was 13, and my father interrupted. The boy came back the next evening and asked if I'd teach his best friend. That was the uncharitable, lol. <br /><br />Elizabeth<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-70362529979673888542016-12-04T06:09:49.074-08:002016-12-04T06:09:49.074-08:00The uncharitable part surprised me. The uncharitable part surprised me. colleenhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-69801595641602390632016-12-04T05:55:15.302-08:002016-12-04T05:55:15.302-08:00What lovely words Hank. I remember my first kiss t...What lovely words Hank. I remember my first kiss though many years ago. something that is always etched in one's mind.<br />Yvonne.nashvillecats2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02326956741209246895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-29481059860137888762016-12-04T05:49:44.871-08:002016-12-04T05:49:44.871-08:00I wish my first kiss had been that hot.I wish my first kiss had been that hot.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com