tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post2042853482494170776..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: pursued by city folkskaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-79190246887751383772017-09-07T21:04:24.034-07:002017-09-07T21:04:24.034-07:00You have gathered all the emotions of closing down...You have gathered all the emotions of closing down a cabin for the winter.Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10359355308140058671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-6671903738111483232017-09-06T16:47:35.982-07:002017-09-06T16:47:35.982-07:00Took me back to a cabin rental in the Redwoods. Th...Took me back to a cabin rental in the Redwoods. Thanks, Hank.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-40351176905115114022017-09-06T13:06:19.372-07:002017-09-06T13:06:19.372-07:00I would love to be in such a place ... yes I am ci...I would love to be in such a place ... yes I am city folk.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-21513866043433753062017-09-06T07:58:06.743-07:002017-09-06T07:58:06.743-07:00And I know a lot of people who are headed for that...And I know a lot of people who are headed for that right now.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-44149004181757428062017-09-06T06:01:57.359-07:002017-09-06T06:01:57.359-07:00City folks sure like the getaway now and then.City folks sure like the getaway now and then.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-41465186788113558072017-09-06T04:45:42.721-07:002017-09-06T04:45:42.721-07:00I think the last line of the tanka "idyllic t...I think the last line of the tanka "idyllic tranquility" meanders nicely into the haiku for one mood, one poem. Read as tanka and haiku separately quite nice also <br /><br />ALSO Hank, thanks for linking to Monday WRites<br /><br />much love...<br />Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-58533325302822596232017-09-06T04:39:08.864-07:002017-09-06T04:39:08.864-07:00Nice contrast in your words.Nice contrast in your words.humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-37600603071770650932017-09-06T04:27:47.728-07:002017-09-06T04:27:47.728-07:00I like the way you've separated the 'unspo...I like the way you've separated the 'unspoiled hideaway' in the tanka from the 'season's exotic shades' in the haiku, but connected them with 'swept by cool winds' in the final line.Kim M. Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16668459794787447606noreply@blogger.com