tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post1973009401178874744..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Arise blackbird!kaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-36210842248384875462015-06-10T13:50:29.393-07:002015-06-10T13:50:29.393-07:00Making that decision to arise is crucial, the defi...Making that decision to arise is crucial, the defining moment when success begins.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-55510980983179542662014-05-10T16:31:59.487-07:002014-05-10T16:31:59.487-07:00The repeating line works so nicely...almost hymn-l...The repeating line works so nicely...almost hymn-like...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-44452181982814632912014-05-09T07:22:26.421-07:002014-05-09T07:22:26.421-07:00Decide your destiny...I believe in that. Good one....Decide your destiny...I believe in that. Good one.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14795001466009913035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-49090352488396260312014-05-07T05:11:14.476-07:002014-05-07T05:11:14.476-07:00A powerful evocation ..." A night of reckonin...A powerful evocation ..." A night of reckoning...precedes the freedom ....of the morning after" ...i love this sort of paradox Silent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-49140746963859944092014-05-06T10:35:52.165-07:002014-05-06T10:35:52.165-07:00Arise blackbird! Good advice!Arise blackbird! Good advice!Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-52630349659507676852014-05-05T17:03:23.109-07:002014-05-05T17:03:23.109-07:00well done with all the prompts!well done with all the prompts!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-2802429078228684682014-05-05T14:46:51.332-07:002014-05-05T14:46:51.332-07:00I too, like the imperative to rise repeated at the...I too, like the imperative to rise repeated at the beginning of each verse. And the thoughtful wisdom that follows each one.<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-35633806589518176712014-05-05T12:48:32.293-07:002014-05-05T12:48:32.293-07:00A brilliant combo of prompts.. there is a positive...A brilliant combo of prompts.. there is a positive drive and energy of your poem I really like.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-89476376903766642502014-05-05T08:35:24.287-07:002014-05-05T08:35:24.287-07:00oops, Arise.oops, Arise.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-15593388197248740292014-05-05T08:34:52.663-07:002014-05-05T08:34:52.663-07:00Love the refrain of "Rise Blackbird", ve...Love the refrain of "Rise Blackbird", very nice use of the words, Hank.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-58097684704069488492014-05-05T07:26:35.065-07:002014-05-05T07:26:35.065-07:00Yes, I think this is quite a rising effect, clear ...Yes, I think this is quite a rising effect, clear vivid and excellent write!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-77897871565542416932014-05-05T06:02:53.595-07:002014-05-05T06:02:53.595-07:00a very clever combination....wonderful :)a very clever combination....wonderful :)Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-25696951994607024132014-05-05T04:33:09.127-07:002014-05-05T04:33:09.127-07:00Nice work combining prompts, Hank. They mesh well...Nice work combining prompts, Hank. They mesh well in your piece.brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2014/05/04/trapped/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-59361705091593934482014-05-04T20:39:08.519-07:002014-05-04T20:39:08.519-07:00Arise blackbird to a new day..Arise blackbird to a new day..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-15469614910565204812014-05-04T17:27:33.613-07:002014-05-04T17:27:33.613-07:00The morning can set us free. What pop ups?The morning can set us free. What pop ups?Holy Ghost Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16107809586103198047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-44701030079310138462014-05-04T17:05:08.123-07:002014-05-04T17:05:08.123-07:00a night of reckoning precedes the freedom on the m...a night of reckoning precedes the freedom on the morning after...what a great line hank....arise, for sure....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-37675364844785381512014-05-04T16:51:15.140-07:002014-05-04T16:51:15.140-07:00That is the way to arise, double the effort and de...That is the way to arise, double the effort and decidePat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com