tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post1433906302838903853..comments2024-03-18T18:22:15.663-07:00Comments on Rainbow: Must I police you like a criminal? - Ukaykualahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-34733908764880703412017-04-26T07:45:30.562-07:002017-04-26T07:45:30.562-07:00I feel the dynamics in the dialog, and contrast of...I feel the dynamics in the dialog, and contrast of characters. Very well done! humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-32359984624688847942017-04-25T08:18:47.144-07:002017-04-25T08:18:47.144-07:00Very intense.Very intense.C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-51025279170957736122017-04-24T08:50:27.684-07:002017-04-24T08:50:27.684-07:00Interesting read!Interesting read!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-63771912182111884062017-04-24T06:35:00.103-07:002017-04-24T06:35:00.103-07:00Interesting dialogue – and a surprise ending which...Interesting dialogue – and a surprise ending which nevertheless makes perfect sense.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-60150935117329374222017-04-24T05:51:14.656-07:002017-04-24T05:51:14.656-07:00Intense and terse dialogue. A word film noir.Intense and terse dialogue. A word film noir.Lorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04398783863793284903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-7913758898274745502017-04-24T05:09:52.989-07:002017-04-24T05:09:52.989-07:00I hope we can all police ourselves - ;)I hope we can all police ourselves - ;)Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-31611259326949572232017-04-24T03:22:55.108-07:002017-04-24T03:22:55.108-07:00The poem is awesome...
I wonder where the "T...The poem is awesome...<br /><br />I wonder where the "T" of A to Z challenge is???<br /><br /><a href="http://mrsdashsayss.blogspot.in/search/label/APOM" rel="nofollow">A Peice Of My Life</a>Deepahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16764125425140331692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-49678282278907342452017-04-24T03:11:19.541-07:002017-04-24T03:11:19.541-07:00That works!That works!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-69191979126727979132017-04-23T23:13:50.364-07:002017-04-23T23:13:50.364-07:00This is quite intense Hank. You managed to get som...This is quite intense Hank. You managed to get some rhymes in. Those lines I liked best. You got me with the intrigue too. You left me wondering. <br />Nice!!! <br /><br />Thanks for linking to my Sunday Standard <br /><br /><br />Much love... Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-79789255219148261012017-04-23T23:03:12.339-07:002017-04-23T23:03:12.339-07:00Oh dear, not a happy situation...it could equally ...Oh dear, not a happy situation...it could equally be the man who is infertile...people always looking to pin it on the women, even own sister. Well done on the poetry as usual.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-43887688580721585242017-04-23T20:44:42.105-07:002017-04-23T20:44:42.105-07:00It reads like a scene from fast paced movie. I fi...It reads like a scene from fast paced movie. I find it difficult to write dialogue but you did a great job. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-58880767267129696602017-04-23T20:22:36.745-07:002017-04-23T20:22:36.745-07:00Well it could be him not her.Well it could be him not her.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-63220975093012152482017-04-23T20:14:26.868-07:002017-04-23T20:14:26.868-07:00That's quite a conclusion. I think someone is...That's quite a conclusion. I think someone is in trouble. colleenhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-41802262891589335802017-04-23T17:31:50.896-07:002017-04-23T17:31:50.896-07:00Leave it to you, Hank. This is intense and draws o...Leave it to you, Hank. This is intense and draws one in. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-33814229602407142452017-04-23T17:19:01.189-07:002017-04-23T17:19:01.189-07:00Great job with the dialogue ... and it can be so t...Great job with the dialogue ... and it can be so tricky. An intense scene - well rendered.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-21591472198886840262017-04-23T17:07:48.454-07:002017-04-23T17:07:48.454-07:00I love dialogue-type poetry, Hank. This is intense...I love dialogue-type poetry, Hank. This is intense and pretty scary to be in a situation. totomaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-72400324438588409032017-04-23T16:39:40.893-07:002017-04-23T16:39:40.893-07:00This is fantastic dialogue, Hank. I can see the pu...This is fantastic dialogue, Hank. I can see the punches and the cringes in the words.Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-1804690703614449742017-04-23T16:37:53.511-07:002017-04-23T16:37:53.511-07:00A situation I would not like to be in, Very well e...A situation I would not like to be in, Very well expressed Hank.<br />Yvonne.nashvillecats2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02326956741209246895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-90164654936867698892017-04-23T15:40:13.900-07:002017-04-23T15:40:13.900-07:00This conversational poem rocks, Hank!This conversational poem rocks, Hank!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-88183051139845314882017-04-23T15:18:38.471-07:002017-04-23T15:18:38.471-07:00Excellent use of the dialogue Hank, so nicely done...Excellent use of the dialogue Hank, so nicely done.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07512953735819338268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-18015130870022547262017-04-23T15:02:05.732-07:002017-04-23T15:02:05.732-07:00This is a fast-paced and tense, tight piece of dia...This is a fast-paced and tense, tight piece of dialogue, Hank. Really well done.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1980374748220249244.post-22795295935330548452017-04-23T14:08:23.651-07:002017-04-23T14:08:23.651-07:00a back and forth that could surely get nasty, ulti...a back and forth that could surely get nasty, ultimatum like the cat, how about that. Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com